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4/6/6 Senryu

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Misty Path

by Gypsy Blue Rose


For Rules, Please Read My Author Notes
 
 
 
walking alone

        on our favorite path  —

your side filled with yearning
 
 
 


 




SENRYU is a Japanese poem with a title that deepens its meaning. Senryu is similar to Haiku but It's about human nature and it doesn't include a season word (kigo). It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but brief. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori.

for more information click here collection of senryu ***** The Haiku Foundation of America

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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