Romance Poetry posted May 3, 2023 Chapters:  ...265 266 -267- 268... 


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Modern Tanka Suite

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Our First Home

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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Yearning for your touch   

and a thousand kisses  

all over me  —   

      as incessant rain and wind   

      play a tune on our window glass

     

morning light sneaks through  

slanted blinds with fairy dust   — 

      that covers your cinnamon  

      and sugared skin                                

      enticing my need to taste 

our laughter echoes  

throughout our empty first home —

      all we need for now   

      is our comfy sturdy bed   

      and a table for two

 
 
 
 



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TANKA is a Japanese unrhymed love poem having about 12 to 31 syllables usually arranged in five lines. The first English-speaking poets imitated the Japanese models of 5-7-5-7-7 syllabic structure in five lines, but because Japanese syllables are shorter than English syllables the poems were too wordy and choppy. The beginning two lines are descriptive and image-focused, and the third line serves as a transition to the bottom two lines which are reflective using metaphor, simile, or personification. The subject matter varies, but most tanka are emotionally stirring or profound, and many are about love. Tanka originated in the seventh century in the Japanese Imperial Court, where women and men engaged in courtship. click here if you want to read modern tanka examples === click here to read Tanka Society of America === click here if you want to read modern tanka rules

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Gypsy
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