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4/8/4 Senryu

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Camp Fire

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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making a fire
    where grandpa and I used to camp —
warm memories
 
 


 

 



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SENRYU is a Japanese poetic form similar to haiku. It's written in 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS usually in a shot/long/short form. Senryu is about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Senryu doesn't need a season word (kigo) but it's okay if you do. It never rhymes. It uses imagery.

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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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