General Poetry posted June 13, 2022 Chapters:  ...74 75 -77- 78... 


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7/4/5 Modern Haiku

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Night Sky on Silver Waves

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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night sky rides on silver waves
as boats dock in ~
flooded with moonlight



 

 
 



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MODERN HAIKU is the English adaptation of Classic Haiku. It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but as brief as possible. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Images don't need to be taken from nature. Seasonality is optional. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. The em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Haiku usually doesn't have a title but in fanstory we have to have one. The Haiku Foundation of America

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