General Poetry posted January 24, 2022 Chapters:  ...173 174 -175- 176... 


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A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Poppies Stretch at Dusk

by Gypsy Blue Rose


poppies stretch at dusk
towards the last light of day 
in scarlet bedgowns



 





Red poppies are one of my favorite flowers. I picked them when I was little and pretended they were ballet dancers by pulling down the petals. The young poppies had different colors before they turned red in full bloom. They remind me of my country of origen, Spain.

5/7/5 poem written in 3 lines with a 5/7/5 syllables pattern. The lines are connected grammatically and it doesn't rhyme. It's similar to haiku but has fewer rules.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

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