General Poetry posted July 16, 2021 Chapters:  ...21 22 -24- 25... 


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A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

The Last Light of Day

by Gypsy Blue Rose



the last light of day 

drenches golden blades of wheat —

obscured miracle 


 



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


Obscure miracle as in a beautiful sunset in a dark night or as in not seen by human eyes but still beautiful.

5/7/5 poem is similar to haiku but has different rules. 5/7/5 poem's rules are simple: syllables count and grammatically connected lines.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
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