Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "Novel pitch"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from robertlmcgraw
This sounds interesting! It definitely looks like a good pitch to me. I say that because, to be honest, I didn't realize that it was actually a pitch. I thought, at first, that you were giving the background for a chapter to follow. By the time I was finished reading, I was intrigued and ready to get to the story! LOL! Good job. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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This sounds interesting! It definitely looks like a good pitch to me. I say that because, to be honest, I didn't realize that it was actually a pitch. I thought, at first, that you were giving the background for a chapter to follow. By the time I was finished reading, I was intrigued and ready to get to the story! LOL! Good job. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the help. LOL
Comment from chcbeck
I love the hook it really did make me want to read more. It's a an added pressure. Good luck and hope this is a great success for you. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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I love the hook it really did make me want to read more. It's a an added pressure. Good luck and hope this is a great success for you. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the help. LOL
Comment from Badger_29
I believe that you are using the proper approach; the description is intriguing. I like how th character's nemes give body and depth to their personality. And the addition of a ghost adds intrigue and mystery.
I find that adding sensory ques, smells, tastes, etc. add a lot of flavor, and put the reader in the scene.
Keep writing, and best of luck in your endeavor!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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I believe that you are using the proper approach; the description is intriguing. I like how th character's nemes give body and depth to their personality. And the addition of a ghost adds intrigue and mystery.
I find that adding sensory ques, smells, tastes, etc. add a lot of flavor, and put the reader in the scene.
Keep writing, and best of luck in your endeavor!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the help.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing your novel pitch with us. I'm afraid I'm not a lot of help, since I've never had the opportunity to write a pitch. However, I do find your synopsis full of information, and a great outline for the book. Please let us know how it goes,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for sharing your novel pitch with us. I'm afraid I'm not a lot of help, since I've never had the opportunity to write a pitch. However, I do find your synopsis full of information, and a great outline for the book. Please let us know how it goes,
~patty~
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MelB
Hi Barb, I truly like the concept of this. It sounds like a very interesting story, in which you can take many different directions. I like the name Cash for the male character. Whose the publisher? Best wishes with it.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Hi Barb, I truly like the concept of this. It sounds like a very interesting story, in which you can take many different directions. I like the name Cash for the male character. Whose the publisher? Best wishes with it.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I will PM the publisher. I've already written the book and posted it on FS a few years ago.
