cocaine and psychedelics
contest entry (see author notes)52 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
Yes, I have seen a lot of testimonies of confirmed wasted cocaine addicts who were cured of addiction instantly without withdrawals when Jesus revealed himself to them and healed them of their cravings for cocaine and heroin. You are right only God, our Savior can save a soul snatched by devil drugs. Thanks fro sharing this excellent poem.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Yes, I have seen a lot of testimonies of confirmed wasted cocaine addicts who were cured of addiction instantly without withdrawals when Jesus revealed himself to them and healed them of their cravings for cocaine and heroin. You are right only God, our Savior can save a soul snatched by devil drugs. Thanks fro sharing this excellent poem.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
Comment from Reedblitzerman
Thank you for sharing. You've got quite a vocabulary. I had to look up eider to see what it was. I noted the sequence of your "people, places or things". Did you duplicate that from the Schoolhouse Rock ditty? Regardless, your poem has a nice rythym to it.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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Thank you for sharing. You've got quite a vocabulary. I had to look up eider to see what it was. I noted the sequence of your "people, places or things". Did you duplicate that from the Schoolhouse Rock ditty? Regardless, your poem has a nice rythym to it.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015
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thank you so much for reading the poem and posting such a kind review. it is very encouraging. i am not familiar with "Schoolhouse Rock ditty". have a merry Christmas :-))
Comment from Lesley Collier
An amazing free style poem relating fragments of thoughts as they pass through a drug filled mind full of warning and danger of this dangerous addiction. Well presented with colorful descriptive words and words of wisdom built inside!
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An amazing free style poem relating fragments of thoughts as they pass through a drug filled mind full of warning and danger of this dangerous addiction. Well presented with colorful descriptive words and words of wisdom built inside!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting post that has a moral to tell the reader. This is a terrible blight on society, but then so is alcohol and cigarettes and they are legal. They do even more damage. Well done.
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This is an interesting post that has a moral to tell the reader. This is a terrible blight on society, but then so is alcohol and cigarettes and they are legal. They do even more damage. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
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Take care. Happy holidays.
Comment from Domino 2
I've never taken serious drugs, though I did approach my local 'trafficker' for some cocaine after I read the multi-coloured stanza first. However, he refused to accept the 'lucky leprechaun certificate' and five 'member pumps' I have saved up, in payment, and accused me of being 'on' something else. ;-)
Maybe that's a good thing as I don't wish to experience the red-highlighted downers you list here as very dramatic warnings, which I read AFTERWARDS. ;-)
Very knowledgeable (or researched) details of this drug, brilliantly presented.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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I've never taken serious drugs, though I did approach my local 'trafficker' for some cocaine after I read the multi-coloured stanza first. However, he refused to accept the 'lucky leprechaun certificate' and five 'member pumps' I have saved up, in payment, and accused me of being 'on' something else. ;-)
Maybe that's a good thing as I don't wish to experience the red-highlighted downers you list here as very dramatic warnings, which I read AFTERWARDS. ;-)
Very knowledgeable (or researched) details of this drug, brilliantly presented.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
Comment from William Ross
Excellent, nice piece of work on cocaine and drug addiction and getting a message across. good luck with piece on the contest.
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Excellent, nice piece of work on cocaine and drug addiction and getting a message across. good luck with piece on the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi ...
This is a powerful piece!. I never got into the drug thing ... even when I was much younger. I've always believed that if there's something wrong in your life that makes it so difficult ... change your life ... don't mask the problem!
Coke, heroin and the like are just flimsy crutches. As you said, it eventually turns on you and will destroy you if you let it.
Lots of good advice in this one at the end. You did a real nice job on this. Good luck in the contest!
Alan
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Hi ...
This is a powerful piece!. I never got into the drug thing ... even when I was much younger. I've always believed that if there's something wrong in your life that makes it so difficult ... change your life ... don't mask the problem!
Coke, heroin and the like are just flimsy crutches. As you said, it eventually turns on you and will destroy you if you let it.
Lots of good advice in this one at the end. You did a real nice job on this. Good luck in the contest!
Alan
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
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You are welcome. And Merry Christmas to you, too!
Comment from Neonewman
What an awesome choice in artwork you have chosen to accompany this masterfully crafted piece you have entered in the horrors of drug addiction contest. I see this piece quickly taking the lead!
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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What an awesome choice in artwork you have chosen to accompany this masterfully crafted piece you have entered in the horrors of drug addiction contest. I see this piece quickly taking the lead!
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
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My pleasure and Merry Christmas to you my friend!
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My pleasure and Merry Christmas to you my friend!
Comment from LIJ Red
That multicolored text is jangling to the eye. I guess it's supposed to be, like the raw nose that comes with snorting. Is life so dear or peace so sweet one should avoid the embrace of the white goddess? Excellent adherence to the prompt. Good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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That multicolored text is jangling to the eye. I guess it's supposed to be, like the raw nose that comes with snorting. Is life so dear or peace so sweet one should avoid the embrace of the white goddess? Excellent adherence to the prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
Comment from royowen
The reasons for my heavy drinking would have been the same as the ones shared here, it numbs the pain of existing in an unfulfilling world, filling a world of pain Artificially, the pain flees for a little while, but returns in the light of effects wearing off, God cured me of booze and gave me a reason to live, well done, beautifully written, let's hope somebody listens, well done, blessings, Roy
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The reasons for my heavy drinking would have been the same as the ones shared here, it numbs the pain of existing in an unfulfilling world, filling a world of pain Artificially, the pain flees for a little while, but returns in the light of effects wearing off, God cured me of booze and gave me a reason to live, well done, beautifully written, let's hope somebody listens, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
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My pleasure
