Savannah Love
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Comment from Tootsie55
Great new chapter. Look forward to the new edition if there is one coming. Also enjoying your other story on Indian lore etc Suggestion Paige becomes accustom(ed)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Great new chapter. Look forward to the new edition if there is one coming. Also enjoying your other story on Indian lore etc Suggestion Paige becomes accustom(ed)
Comment Written 15-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the encouragement. Not sure if there will be a new addition or not. I need to finish Texas Dream catcher first.
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Yes we need to continue with that fer shore hehe. Wishing you well with Savanna Publishing.
Comment from Ben Colder
My experience over the years placed me with mostly traditional publishers. However, I have experience both acceptance and rejection as well. Normally, I would not respond to this, but the story intrigues me to the point of wishing you the best in selling your write. What I have come to understand is giving the publisher a hooker for his or attention. You have done that with, Paige is an heiress from Massachusetts, who inherited an antebellum mansion in Savannah. As a child, Paige would spend summers in this mansion with her aunt and uncle. She fondly remembers these carefree summers and the family folklore surrounding this home. Already on the first day, Paige wonders if the ghost her aunt told her about was real.
Sets a stage for interest.
Now, bring the publisher's mind into something of caparison. Use examples in comparison with the same genre you have read that had been a big seller.
These sparks desire to continue the read with expectations
Barbara, I am so out of touch with modern thinking now, but what I mentioned at one time worked. Who knows it just might happen again. My blessings to you as I do hope someone can see the story as a great seller. You have done well, regardless.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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My experience over the years placed me with mostly traditional publishers. However, I have experience both acceptance and rejection as well. Normally, I would not respond to this, but the story intrigues me to the point of wishing you the best in selling your write. What I have come to understand is giving the publisher a hooker for his or attention. You have done that with, Paige is an heiress from Massachusetts, who inherited an antebellum mansion in Savannah. As a child, Paige would spend summers in this mansion with her aunt and uncle. She fondly remembers these carefree summers and the family folklore surrounding this home. Already on the first day, Paige wonders if the ghost her aunt told her about was real.
Sets a stage for interest.
Now, bring the publisher's mind into something of caparison. Use examples in comparison with the same genre you have read that had been a big seller.
These sparks desire to continue the read with expectations
Barbara, I am so out of touch with modern thinking now, but what I mentioned at one time worked. Who knows it just might happen again. My blessings to you as I do hope someone can see the story as a great seller. You have done well, regardless.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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You are a blessing to me. Thank you for all your encouragement.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent letter, Barbara, I didn't spot any errors. it was clearly stated and gave a hint of what was inside. I enjoyed reading it and pray your novel finds a publisher.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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this is an excellent letter, Barbara, I didn't spot any errors. it was clearly stated and gave a hint of what was inside. I enjoyed reading it and pray your novel finds a publisher.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Sounds like a fantastic novel. I will look up your first novel on Amazon, it really sounds intriguing. I wish you the very best in your writing career. I am just getting interested in writing some short stories simply because I enjoy it.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Sounds like a fantastic novel. I will look up your first novel on Amazon, it really sounds intriguing. I wish you the very best in your writing career. I am just getting interested in writing some short stories simply because I enjoy it.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the encouragement. I hope you enjoy Two Tattered Hearts
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. My suggestion get to the point even faster. I don't know that you need to include information on browsing their website or Writer's Digest. Not important. What follows IS important and should be brought to their attention sooner in my opinion. Outside of that great job. This does a wonderful job of selling your novel. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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I thought this was well written. My suggestion get to the point even faster. I don't know that you need to include information on browsing their website or Writer's Digest. Not important. What follows IS important and should be brought to their attention sooner in my opinion. Outside of that great job. This does a wonderful job of selling your novel. Good luck!
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the encouragement and suggestions.
