Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 210 "Baby Eaglet in its Nest"Photograph Inspired Poems
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Comment from rod007
The mouths we feed as parents to our kids---the satiation of the hunger of our little ones. We'd be starving but our kids need to be fed first. I suppose that is why my kids are tall and strong. I liked these lines:
"This youngster's full of helplessness
While parents offer tenderness"
Brilliant, well done.
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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The mouths we feed as parents to our kids---the satiation of the hunger of our little ones. We'd be starving but our kids need to be fed first. I suppose that is why my kids are tall and strong. I liked these lines:
"This youngster's full of helplessness
While parents offer tenderness"
Brilliant, well done.
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you rod, yup, as it should be.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Impressive and very thoughtfully worded.
Each individual Triolet is complete in itself but also connects well to the remaining three.
An interesting subject and the factual information provides clarity on the subject in question.
A feat accomplished well indeed.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Impressive and very thoughtfully worded.
Each individual Triolet is complete in itself but also connects well to the remaining three.
An interesting subject and the factual information provides clarity on the subject in question.
A feat accomplished well indeed.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you Shirley. What a wonderful review.
Comment from Pantygynt
I'd never thought of trhis before but the repetitions, sensitively handled as here make the triolet form, when used as verses of a single poem, particularly suited to poetry for children. Speaking as an ex-teache of 10/11 year olds I know they would have loved this.
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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I'd never thought of trhis before but the repetitions, sensitively handled as here make the triolet form, when used as verses of a single poem, particularly suited to poetry for children. Speaking as an ex-teache of 10/11 year olds I know they would have loved this.
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I do believe you are correct about the children. I find the Triolet an intriguing form. I tell those new to poetry and who want to try a repeating form that this is by far the simplest, yet it creates a lovely verse if you write the first two lines well.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
First it is an amazing photo that you took..You always amaze not only with your photos but you skill at weaving words of rhyme Another great write Mr T
TK
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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First it is an amazing photo that you took..You always amaze not only with your photos but you skill at weaving words of rhyme Another great write Mr T
TK
Comment Written 16-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you so much Sir T. The amazing thing is, i took that photo from 200 yards away.
Comment from wonderpanda557
This is an amazing poem and I hope you keep making poems like this! :D
The flow and the rhymes are meticulously so, and I love it! :DDD
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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This is an amazing poem and I hope you keep making poems like this! :D
The flow and the rhymes are meticulously so, and I love it! :DDD
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Thank you wonredpanda.
Comment from KyoKohitsuji
I really like your poem. It's something i'd enjoy my grandfather reading to me, as i thought he was magical with animals. The poem felt simple, relaxing and melodic. I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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I really like your poem. It's something i'd enjoy my grandfather reading to me, as i thought he was magical with animals. The poem felt simple, relaxing and melodic. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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If it was so enjoyable, why did you only rank it a 3.
