Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 208 "A Lovely Garden"Photograph Inspired Poems
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is really a lovely picture of words, Tom, to go perfectly with the lovely picture photo you took. You are really clever at finding lovely scenes to snap. Very enjoyable, and I did like the style, the Tercets were perfect. :) Sandra. xsx
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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This is really a lovely picture of words, Tom, to go perfectly with the lovely picture photo you took. You are really clever at finding lovely scenes to snap. Very enjoyable, and I did like the style, the Tercets were perfect. :) Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much, my friend.
Comment from emrpoems
A delightful story that captured the attention of the reader in the same way that the sight of the garden captured your.
Awesome pairing of picture and poem.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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A delightful story that captured the attention of the reader in the same way that the sight of the garden captured your.
Awesome pairing of picture and poem.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thank you Erica.
Comment from GregoryCody
Again, I don't know how you do it. This is such an interesting, and difficult form. May I ask, dumb question I know, what exactly is a tercet?
Great alliteration in shafts of sunlight came shining through. Beautifully worded. Sloped stone wall. Great. Fantastic close too. Was this in trochaic?
Sorry I've taken so long to review. I have a newborn. He's been taking up my time of course. But I'll be back reviewing full force soon. I miss reading your work.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Again, I don't know how you do it. This is such an interesting, and difficult form. May I ask, dumb question I know, what exactly is a tercet?
Great alliteration in shafts of sunlight came shining through. Beautifully worded. Sloped stone wall. Great. Fantastic close too. Was this in trochaic?
Sorry I've taken so long to review. I have a newborn. He's been taking up my time of course. But I'll be back reviewing full force soon. I miss reading your work.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thank you Gregory. A tercet is a 3 line stanza. Glad you enjoyed it .
Comment from lakeport
A lovely garden, indeed that's a beautiful garden, That's a wonderful expressed poem. Very nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. lakeport.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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A lovely garden, indeed that's a beautiful garden, That's a wonderful expressed poem. Very nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. lakeport.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you Lakeport.
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you are very welcome,lakeport.
Comment from rod007
You really love your town and the scenery and I like the adventurer in you when I read these almost comical lines:
" A pond, the center of it all,
Surrounded by a sloped stone wall,
Was a perfect place to find a duck , or two.
A duck or two, indeed, my friend, Tom. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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You really love your town and the scenery and I like the adventurer in you when I read these almost comical lines:
" A pond, the center of it all,
Surrounded by a sloped stone wall,
Was a perfect place to find a duck , or two.
A duck or two, indeed, my friend, Tom. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you rod. I do love it here.
Comment from Nosha17
What a lovely picture you took and you have captured Nature's beauty in the lovely imagery of the poem. Excellent choice of words and rhyming. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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What a lovely picture you took and you have captured Nature's beauty in the lovely imagery of the poem. Excellent choice of words and rhyming. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much Faye.
Comment from Njorgensen
What a lovely tribute to a beautiful scene. Your words create a picture to match the one above. I liked your use of tercets and rhyming. I felt this form engaged the reader and kept your expressions' focus.
Nancy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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What a lovely tribute to a beautiful scene. Your words create a picture to match the one above. I liked your use of tercets and rhyming. I felt this form engaged the reader and kept your expressions' focus.
Nancy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much Njorgensen.
Comment from adewpearl
as always, a lovely photo
I like the rhymes and the rhyme scheme
good cadence when read aloud and good flow from line to line because of the enjambment
good use of alliteration such as in surrounded by a sloped stone
good detail of setting
and I like the celebratory tone, especially in the closing :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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as always, a lovely photo
I like the rhymes and the rhyme scheme
good cadence when read aloud and good flow from line to line because of the enjambment
good use of alliteration such as in surrounded by a sloped stone
good detail of setting
and I like the celebratory tone, especially in the closing :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you Brooke, for a lovely, detailed review.
Comment from Pantygynt
Another nice one, a fitting companion to a lovely photo. I hope the food there is as good as the view. Another interesting form using tercets is the Italian Terza Rima. There is no set rhythm or overall length but the rhyme scheme goes: aba, bcb, cdc, ded, e. Yes there is a concluding single line that can become a couplet. It is a fun form to play with. I shall be posting one soon.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Another nice one, a fitting companion to a lovely photo. I hope the food there is as good as the view. Another interesting form using tercets is the Italian Terza Rima. There is no set rhythm or overall length but the rhyme scheme goes: aba, bcb, cdc, ded, e. Yes there is a concluding single line that can become a couplet. It is a fun form to play with. I shall be posting one soon.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank Pantygynt. Yes, i have done some. It is a good format too. Looking forward to yours.
Comment from mbagby23
Great imagery. Sounds peaceful, I would go there every time I was stress or needed some place to relax. Lovely picture as well.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Great imagery. Sounds peaceful, I would go there every time I was stress or needed some place to relax. Lovely picture as well.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you, mbagby.
