Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 203 "Reeds and Water"Photograph Inspired Poems
15 total reviews
Comment from Finglas
Very well done. The rhyme scheme, structure, and imagery evoke a pleasant bucolic sense of serenity. I also love the message.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Very well done. The rhyme scheme, structure, and imagery evoke a pleasant bucolic sense of serenity. I also love the message.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thank you Finglas.
Comment from Ben Colder
The poet reminds the public awareness of loosing our wetlands and with it our wild geese as well. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this important message.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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The poet reminds the public awareness of loosing our wetlands and with it our wild geese as well. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this important message.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thank you Ben. I appreciate that.
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your 8-6 format of rhymed couplets and your reflections about preserving wildlife habitats. Your photograph of bright Mallard pair in their natural environment reinforced your message perfectly. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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I enjoyed your 8-6 format of rhymed couplets and your reflections about preserving wildlife habitats. Your photograph of bright Mallard pair in their natural environment reinforced your message perfectly. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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Thank you Joan. Great comments.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Brilliant bit of photography here, Tom, lovely picture of the Malards swimming there. Your poem is, as usual, up to your high standard and I was pleased to note you have put a word in for preserving these natural wildlife habitats. It is so important that our grandchildren and their children get to see these lovely sights. Excellent! :) Sandra.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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Brilliant bit of photography here, Tom, lovely picture of the Malards swimming there. Your poem is, as usual, up to your high standard and I was pleased to note you have put a word in for preserving these natural wildlife habitats. It is so important that our grandchildren and their children get to see these lovely sights. Excellent! :) Sandra.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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Thank you Sandra. I'm most happy you liked it.
Comment from risktaker
I love the photo, theme, scene, and the tone. the message is clear and the peace is evident.The word choice and rhyme is excellent. I love your photo choices, you have a gift with photography. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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I love the photo, theme, scene, and the tone. the message is clear and the peace is evident.The word choice and rhyme is excellent. I love your photo choices, you have a gift with photography. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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Thank you risktaker, for the wonderful review, and the compliment.
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Comment from rod007
Your poem depicts the animals with beauty. But then you add a lesson for all of us in these lines:
"For birds and beasts must have a home,
Open space to live and roam.
Our generation must preserve
Its parks and vast reserves."
Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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Your poem depicts the animals with beauty. But then you add a lesson for all of us in these lines:
"For birds and beasts must have a home,
Open space to live and roam.
Our generation must preserve
Its parks and vast reserves."
Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2015
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Thank you Rod. I do strongly believe in conservation.
Comment from Pantygynt
Will you kindly write something I can find fault with! Everything you do is different and superlative. If ever I come to the US I would like you to be my guide. I reckon you just have to know all the best places with all the history. Thanks again for another winner.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Will you kindly write something I can find fault with! Everything you do is different and superlative. If ever I come to the US I would like you to be my guide. I reckon you just have to know all the best places with all the history. Thanks again for another winner.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I'd love to show you around.
Comment from rstonerjr
I enjoyed this write of preservation of habitat. The form works in this message, the rhyme offering a smooth read. I salute you for offering this needed write to preserve our wet land ever so important.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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I enjoyed this write of preservation of habitat. The form works in this message, the rhyme offering a smooth read. I salute you for offering this needed write to preserve our wet land ever so important.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you rstonerjr.
Comment from ronnie k
I enjoyed the poem so much for the structured stanzas that not being able to follow its style had no affect on the pleasure the poem gave me , so I give it all I have in stars today.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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I enjoyed the poem so much for the structured stanzas that not being able to follow its style had no affect on the pleasure the poem gave me , so I give it all I have in stars today.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you Ronnie. That all an author can ask.
Comment from alf collier
Hi Treischel. I thought was a wonderful poem, but it has the added bonus of a plea to preserve our world for future generations. Love it, alf
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Hi Treischel. I thought was a wonderful poem, but it has the added bonus of a plea to preserve our world for future generations. Love it, alf
Comment Written 10-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you alf.
