Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 206 "I Dream"Photograph Inspired Poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I often think that simple thoughts can be the best for they are uncluttered by so many other things.
This expression of simple thought is beautiful and reflects the simple, yet beautiful image choice.
A perfect ABAB quatrain.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015
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I often think that simple thoughts can be the best for they are uncluttered by so many other things.
This expression of simple thought is beautiful and reflects the simple, yet beautiful image choice.
A perfect ABAB quatrain.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 06-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015
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Thank you Shirley. A wonderful review.
Comment from ravenblack
fat, fluffy snowflakes fluttering down becoming butterflies - though that dream seems unattainable right now, in a few months the reign of white will be over. I think we are all dreaming your dream.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015
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fat, fluffy snowflakes fluttering down becoming butterflies - though that dream seems unattainable right now, in a few months the reign of white will be over. I think we are all dreaming your dream.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015
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Thank you ravenblack. Right on!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Ah, and I dream along with you, friend.
I've just returned from four weeks in sunny Sri Lanka, visiting my parents.
As for the snow and ice ... I have no words ... ugh!
Sonali
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015
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Ah, and I dream along with you, friend.
I've just returned from four weeks in sunny Sri Lanka, visiting my parents.
As for the snow and ice ... I have no words ... ugh!
Sonali
Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015
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Thank you Sonali. I'm getting ready for spring now.
Comment from rod007
A great poem, Tom. I wish I could see butterflies midst the thick snow and ice here, I think that would be wishful thinking, but the thought is nice. I liked the idea of the fat flakes futtering in the freeze. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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A great poem, Tom. I wish I could see butterflies midst the thick snow and ice here, I think that would be wishful thinking, but the thought is nice. I liked the idea of the fat flakes futtering in the freeze. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Thank you rod.
Comment from risktaker
I feel the desire for sunshine, cool breezes, colorful flowers, and picnics in the park.Winter snow storms are the absence of everything previously mentioned.The message is clear and the photo is awesome. thanks
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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I feel the desire for sunshine, cool breezes, colorful flowers, and picnics in the park.Winter snow storms are the absence of everything previously mentioned.The message is clear and the photo is awesome. thanks
Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Thank you risktaker. For dreaming together.
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Comment from Joan E.
How fortunate you were to capture the glorious Monarch! I understand your yearning for spring and admired the contrast in the poem's scene with its rhymed quatrain. Here's to more butterflies and soon! -Joan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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How fortunate you were to capture the glorious Monarch! I understand your yearning for spring and admired the contrast in the poem's scene with its rhymed quatrain. Here's to more butterflies and soon! -Joan
Comment Written 03-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Thank you Joan. Yes, that would be nice.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom - I have the same dream my friend. I am so past winter and need spring's re-birth. This is a lovely and well penned poem - I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Dear Tom - I have the same dream my friend. I am so past winter and need spring's re-birth. This is a lovely and well penned poem - I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 03-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Thank you Maureen. Yes, i gathered the from your last poem I reviewed. In fact, it helped inspire this one.
Comment from trimple
Hello, Tom
A stunning photograph you have taken here to accompany your very lovely poem.
Your reader is left contemplating the mood you set.
Much love
tracey
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Hello, Tom
A stunning photograph you have taken here to accompany your very lovely poem.
Your reader is left contemplating the mood you set.
Much love
tracey
Comment Written 03-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Thank you Tracey. Thinking spring.
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