Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

And today, Tom, you taught me yet another form of poetry ... the cameo.

I love the slivers of rhyme you've seasoned it with.

Gorgeous photo - talented photographer!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you Sonali. I blushing with pride over such accolades.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

My husband was a photographer and photo historian, and yes, I accompanied many times as he searched for the light during the golden hour. Thank you so much for a stunning photo and for giving me such a lovely memory.
love the gets/silhouettes rhyming and the beautiful alliteration in setting sun silhouettes
beautiful descriptive detail of setting and you create such an upbeat, celebratory mood :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you Brooke. Indeed, you would then truly know the golden hour. Glad to facilitate a memory.

Comment from tw4fun

Good

I Like the beauty you cpture an the rhym scheme is smooth. The soundsare pleasing to ear magic gets ... silhouettesthe--your landscapes and building shapes work well. You write well and I enjoyed this work of art

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you tw4fun

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Hi there,
Not only is the Cameo in perfect form, with an outstanding message, but the photo presentation is ideal. Congratulations on capturing the perfect 'golden moment'.
I enjoyed this one so much. Thanks for sharing.
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you Carolyn.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Martin. The picture is worth a thousand words but you managed to dexcribe it in just a few, well done. This is an interesting form of poetry and you did a good job with it. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you Fez.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Your cameo presents a graphic word picture in consonance with your chosen artwork. As you suggest, it is a form well-suited to such paring, as in greetings cards. Apart from your rhyming, which is a definite enhancement, I found the carry-over alliteration of setting sun / silhouettes and escapes / enchants helped to give this short poem shape.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you very much Tony, not everyone would have picked the up.

Comment from alf collier

Excellent

Hi treischel. When I read the words and looked at the photo, my heart melted. You gave meaning to the words with the picture and gave meaning to the picture with the words. Loved it! alf

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thank you Alf. I loved your heartfelt review.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

The imagery and words are powerful in conveying the melting and melding of the sun's silhouette within the sleepy city. well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015

Thank you rod, melding and melting, such an alliterate review.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

The image and words convey the message well.
A Cameo poem is not a style I am familiar with but I can see that much can be
said in a fixed format style when thought and planning are used.
A lovely golden hour sunset image.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2015

Thank you Shirley. I am happy with that shot.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A pretty sunset, lovely artwork, Tom;
Well-penned dedication to the day's completion;
Nice alliteration provides good visual imagery;
"mellow glow"--my favorite descriptive line.
No finer way to complete the day than admiring what the skies have to offer.
A nice poem--a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015

Thank you Margaret. One of my favorite things to do.