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Photograph Inspired Poems

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Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
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A challenging format here my friend. Like always I like your work and your photography as well and this one is no exception
TK

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014
    Thank you Sir T
Comment from rod007
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A simple poetic structure with minimal syllable count but effective. As your picture shows tall trees does adorn and enhance the beauty of these three story houses. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you rod. I wish I could afford to live in that section of town.
Comment from Capricorn30
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I like the older house nestled amongst the trees; as both the building and the trees are old, they both give the photo an antiquated look--a historic feel;
I enjoy your poem with spot-on rhyme, and good alliteration;
Well-penned dedication to both neighborhood and the woody plants which give streets a charming appeal.
Excellent!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you Margaret. Glad to share both.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a lovely area to live in, Tom. The trees certainly are magnificent, and regal looking. Your poem serves well to enhance the photo even more, a real pleasure to read. :) xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you Sandra. glad you enjoyed the little visit to my town.
Comment from Joan E.
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Wow--your photograph is like a matte painting for a movie! You capture the mood perfectly with your emphatic repeats and rhymes. Thanks for the overview of St. Paul! Happy Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you Joan. Always glad to show off my town.
Comment from Ronni
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Fascinating reflection on these magnificent tall trees,
and I love the way you made them 'center stage' in
your poem throughout in the repetitive phrases.
Gorgeous picture expressing your fond sentiments
regarding St. Paul, itself a most picturesque city
amongst such tall, stately trees.
Thank you for sharing, a delightful read.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you Ronni. yes, I love rto show offd my home town.
Comment from lakeport
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tall trees, indeed thank God for the trees without trees there would be almost no life.That's a very nice expressed poem,nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.lakeport.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
    Thank you lakeport for reviewing.
reply by lakeport on 23-Nov-2014
    you are welcome.lakeport.