Picture Poems
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Comment from jim lawler
A rather nice verse and it flowed quite well. It was an easy read and it bring pleasant thoughts to mind. You're right, "The season go by in a blink", so too do the days of our lives. I didn't see any typos And it doesn't need any revision. Good luck! Jim
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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A rather nice verse and it flowed quite well. It was an easy read and it bring pleasant thoughts to mind. You're right, "The season go by in a blink", so too do the days of our lives. I didn't see any typos And it doesn't need any revision. Good luck! Jim
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Thank you very much Jim for that very assessment.
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You're very welcome and good luck to you! Jim
Comment from gypsymoth
Nicely done. You chose the right time to be in the right
place. Aren't you glad you went? You got a lot of inspiration
from that trip. Of you three poems, I like this one the best.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Nicely done. You chose the right time to be in the right
place. Aren't you glad you went? You got a lot of inspiration
from that trip. Of you three poems, I like this one the best.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Thank you gypsymoth. Yes, that walk yielded quite a bit.
Comment from emrpoems
Excellent visuals created in phrases like-The trees bejeweled
excellent use of alliteration -dazzling/ delighting, delicate/ dangling/ dancing
Awesome picture of the trees in bloom
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Excellent visuals created in phrases like-The trees bejeweled
excellent use of alliteration -dazzling/ delighting, delicate/ dangling/ dancing
Awesome picture of the trees in bloom
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
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Thank you emrpoems . I'm delighted you liked it.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What an awesome and beautiful sight these majestic trees all dressed in colour provide. Certainly a feast for our eyes.
I like the free verse format which does do exactly as you state-allows the words to speak for themselves .
The image choice complements the words perfectly.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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What an awesome and beautiful sight these majestic trees all dressed in colour provide. Certainly a feast for our eyes.
I like the free verse format which does do exactly as you state-allows the words to speak for themselves .
The image choice complements the words perfectly.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Shirley. That is great that you like it so well and ranked it so high. I really appreciate your opinion.
Comment from Joan E.
I am so glad you captured the show--again, it reminds me of our recent trip and how lucky we were to see Fall colors in prime time. I enjoyed your alliteration of "d's" and the wonderful "chandelier" metaphor plus the use of sound. Happy Halloween- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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I am so glad you captured the show--again, it reminds me of our recent trip and how lucky we were to see Fall colors in prime time. I enjoyed your alliteration of "d's" and the wonderful "chandelier" metaphor plus the use of sound. Happy Halloween- Joan
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Joan, they are all gone now, but i do have more pictures to share and inspire me.
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Keep being inspired and sharing! Smiles- Joan
Comment from innerworlds
You have used a free verse form that I haven't seen before. It works very well to highlight certain lines for greater effect.
Of the poems of yours that I have read so far, this one is my favorite. It is eloquent, seeing the change of season through a magical looking glass that magnifies the colors and crystalline feel of autumn: beautiful, fragile, crisp. The beauty ends way too soon. Thank you for sharing. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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You have used a free verse form that I haven't seen before. It works very well to highlight certain lines for greater effect.
Of the poems of yours that I have read so far, this one is my favorite. It is eloquent, seeing the change of season through a magical looking glass that magnifies the colors and crystalline feel of autumn: beautiful, fragile, crisp. The beauty ends way too soon. Thank you for sharing. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much innerworlds . I really appreciate you reading this and the strong review that your gave it.
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting metaphor to describe the magnificence of the tree in all its autumn glory. It is as if the light has been turned out when the leaves fall leaving just the bare branches. Especially dramatic when it happens at the hand of Jack Frost who has a way of cutting all the leaves simultaneously.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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An interesting metaphor to describe the magnificence of the tree in all its autumn glory. It is as if the light has been turned out when the leaves fall leaving just the bare branches. Especially dramatic when it happens at the hand of Jack Frost who has a way of cutting all the leaves simultaneously.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you tfawcus. Yes Jack comes too swiftly to spoil out reveries
Comment from ravenblack
good to see you tackle free verse again. this is really good, your metaphor of chandelier creating a perfect visual. needless to say, really good use of alliteration. poof//it's gone//a season in a blink - and it is that impermanence that makes it so precious. excellent!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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good to see you tackle free verse again. this is really good, your metaphor of chandelier creating a perfect visual. needless to say, really good use of alliteration. poof//it's gone//a season in a blink - and it is that impermanence that makes it so precious. excellent!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you ravenblack. You set a good example.
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Thank you!
Comment from adewpearl
charming, lovely descriptions, like the bejeweled trees
wonderful alliteration in dazzling, delighting, delicate, dangling, dancing
great visual of the twinkling chandelier
powerful change of tone in the closing
Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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charming, lovely descriptions, like the bejeweled trees
wonderful alliteration in dazzling, delighting, delicate, dangling, dancing
great visual of the twinkling chandelier
powerful change of tone in the closing
Brooke
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you Brooke. Your review means a great deal to me.
Comment from robina1978
Great photo by you, that complements your poem very well. It is a free verse with mainly alliteration. About the Autumn leaves and how they blew away.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Great photo by you, that complements your poem very well. It is a free verse with mainly alliteration. About the Autumn leaves and how they blew away.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you Ine for such a nice review
