Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed the regularity of your quatrains and the presentation with another of your parallel photographs. I admired your use of direct address and your rhymed couplets. More cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Joan. A very perceptive review.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

Another excellent offering of your dance with the creatures of our world. In this one you portray well the fascination of the wings and how those very wings leads the butterfly to quickly disappear. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you rod. I appreciate your excellent discernment.

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Hi Tom

What a wonderful picture you have taken.

My favorite bugs:)

Your poem is quite lovely and gives a wonderful sense of the beautiful butterfly.

kind regards

trimple

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Tracey. My favorite too, next to dragon flies.

reply by trimple on 16-Oct-2014

Ah yes! I love those too. Incredibly beautiful bugs. :)

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

"Butterfly so blue";
Indeed they are; I don't believe I've ever seen one fluttering before me;
Well-penned thoughts on a colorful insects; not many in the entomology world don bright hues.
You've captured the essence of delicate blue wings beholding this unique moment.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you, Margaret. Yes, blue is very special.

Comment from faygrizzle

Good

I love the way how it rhymes. You have placed a lot of thought and effort into it. I can tell that you love and admire butterflies. Good job.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you Fay

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Treischel, I enjoyed the shorter syllable lines that takes their own flight as quickly as the elusive butterfly. Solid rhyme in the aa bb and so forth construct. Nice alliteration in the b's and w's. Catchy embedded rhymes give richness to the write. Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you GracieAnn. What a nice and excellent review

Comment from rjpurdy

Excellent

lovely asentiment. Your poem reads like a lovely lilting melodie flitting in the air with your butterflies. A nice piece of work and an enjoyable read. ~rj~

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, RJ