This World
This is the world we are living,just one way to describe it2 total reviews
Comment from Christopher Lones
I thought it was pretty good. I was expecting something different when I clicked on it but it was still really good. It flows really well.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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I thought it was pretty good. I was expecting something different when I clicked on it but it was still really good. It flows really well.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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thanks christopher. i truly appreciate
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thanks christopher. i truly appreciate
Comment from Eric1
Hi Alice, this is a lovely piece of poetry, but I'm sorry to tell you that it would be disqualified under competition rules, a 5-7-5 should be three lines made up with five syllables, then seven syllables, then another five syllables, if you return to the 5-7-5 pagethere is an example, you are allowed corrections until the contest closes, good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Hi Alice, this is a lovely piece of poetry, but I'm sorry to tell you that it would be disqualified under competition rules, a 5-7-5 should be three lines made up with five syllables, then seven syllables, then another five syllables, if you return to the 5-7-5 pagethere is an example, you are allowed corrections until the contest closes, good luck.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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thanks Eric.let me give it a try
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thanks Eric.let me give it a try
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Go for it alice
