Savannah Love
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb I like how you slowly stating to end your novel.
Page been asked by Cash to get married and the bubble bath scene is really good. Truthfully I hate to see your story come to an end.
Gert
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Hi Barb I like how you slowly stating to end your novel.
Page been asked by Cash to get married and the bubble bath scene is really good. Truthfully I hate to see your story come to an end.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review. I have another story I am starting to write. I hope you will enjoy it.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Sankey
Awww lovely sensual and all that. All honourable and all as they have committed huh! Glad he believes in Bradley now. So is this the end or what? NO SPAGS! yay!
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Awww lovely sensual and all that. All honourable and all as they have committed huh! Glad he believes in Bradley now. So is this the end or what? NO SPAGS! yay!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review.
Comment from angelface2
Nice ending, Barbara. I would ignore the dog too. hehe. :>D I enjoyed reading your story. You are a good writer. Hope you have another one. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Nice ending, Barbara. I would ignore the dog too. hehe. :>D I enjoyed reading your story. You are a good writer. Hope you have another one. Miss Sally
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review. I have another story I am starting to write. I hope you will enjoy it.
Comment from Cajungirl
What a fantastic ending. I must say that you have yourself a great novel here. I wish you the best of luck in publishing it. Thank you for sharing your work.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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What a fantastic ending. I must say that you have yourself a great novel here. I wish you the best of luck in publishing it. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review. I have another story I am starting to write. I hope you will enjoy it.
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You are welcome and I look forward to reading it.
Comment from judiverse
Definitely a 6, and congratulations on the great work. Much success with this. I enjoyed the way you brought Bradley into the mix. He practically has to tell Cash what to do every step of the way. It makes a fitting ending that Bradley gave Cash the ring. Bradley is a great ghost, the way he's looked out for everyone. Excellent characterization in this. I liked Amos, and it helps to have a cute dog like Morgan in the mix. judi
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Definitely a 6, and congratulations on the great work. Much success with this. I enjoyed the way you brought Bradley into the mix. He practically has to tell Cash what to do every step of the way. It makes a fitting ending that Bradley gave Cash the ring. Bradley is a great ghost, the way he's looked out for everyone. Excellent characterization in this. I liked Amos, and it helps to have a cute dog like Morgan in the mix. judi
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review. I have another story I am starting to write. I hope you will enjoy it.
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Hi, Barbara. You're so welcome, and I'll be looking forward to your next. judi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - I had a laugh with Bradley pushing Cash into the bathroom.
Again smoothly and skillfully penned. I've enjoyed this book and wish you much success in its publication launch. A six for the whole book:)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Dear Barbara - I had a laugh with Bradley pushing Cash into the bathroom.
Again smoothly and skillfully penned. I've enjoyed this book and wish you much success in its publication launch. A six for the whole book:)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this wonderful review.
Comment from c_lucas
The sixer is for a very well written novel. You did an excellent job of keeping your characters untangled and your story line moving forward.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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The sixer is for a very well written novel. You did an excellent job of keeping your characters untangled and your story line moving forward.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this wonderful review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Ben Colder
Well that should clean up things without dirtying the story. Sounds as if they have a friend beyond looking after them. This was a good story. I really liked it. Publish?
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Well that should clean up things without dirtying the story. Sounds as if they have a friend beyond looking after them. This was a good story. I really liked it. Publish?
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this wonderful review. Polishing will happen this summer.
Comment from adewpearl
chuckling, glaring eyes, winking, widened eyes - good use of non-verbal communication to enhance the spoken conversation
What a delightful ending to this story - I love that Bradley gave the ring to Cash - not only proof of his existence but his seal of approval of the relationship
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this book.
Are you thinking of entering the novel contest?
Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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chuckling, glaring eyes, winking, widened eyes - good use of non-verbal communication to enhance the spoken conversation
What a delightful ending to this story - I love that Bradley gave the ring to Cash - not only proof of his existence but his seal of approval of the relationship
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this book.
Are you thinking of entering the novel contest?
Brooke
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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I don't know, that I'm going to do. I am going to edit it and then wonder if you'd be interesting editing it for me???? Thank you for dropping by and leaving this wonderful review.
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I would be more than happy to edit it. Since this one, already posted, can't be entered in that contest, I was wondering if you were dreaming up a new book to enter :-)
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I have a new book on my mind. I hope it comes together.
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fantastic :-)
