Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, Barbara, and I hate to see it end. I hope you are able to get it published, but I hope you'll write some more while you're editing this one.

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Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Hahahaha! YES! My only regret is that I am already out of sixes, Barbara. It's about bloody time those two got it together! What a great way to end this story, too. :) Congratulations!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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reply by Dawn Munro on 09-Jun-2014

It was my pleasure, my friend. It's a wonderful book.

Comment from elgone

Excellent

Congratulations on the completion of the story. I guess you have all summer vacation to revise it. Let me know if you need any help getting it to a publisher. Pandamoon is accepting submissions again.

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Comment from Janie King

Exceptional

The end...that is sad in its own way as I feelmi know all of these charavcters and now wonder what comes next. Very goodvending. God loves you and I do too.

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Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Excellent finish to a fine novel, Barbara. Congratulations, and I'll be waiting to start the next one at the beginning.

Good editing!

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Comment from Cumbrianlass

Exceptional

Love the ending, Barbara! I'm so happy these two finally got together, with literally a push from Bradley! A nice touch, too, using the ring that way.

I enjoyed the story very much, and look forward to the next one.

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Savannah,

Looks as if I've gotten in on the very end of this one! Nice, believable dialogue. Easy to pick up on the story as well. Your notes from previous chapter were great.

Well done.

Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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Comment from CALLAHANMR

Exceptional

Hi Barbara:)
Wow! Plenty of mental imagery in this post, as Bradley's ghost completes its matchmaking while changing Cash's beliefs about the spirit world.

Now Cash will be able to complete the restoration of the antebellum mansion.

More love and Irish Hugs for solving the big mystery of Civil War treasure.

Bring on the next novel.

Roger

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Comment from risktaker

Excellent

This is a touching moment vividly expressed. I love the imagery, message and can feel the love between the couple.
I like the flow, tone, and dialogue. I want to know what happens next. The scene in the bathtub is very romantic.
Good job.

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Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Good ending, Barbara. Nice to see that Cash has finally accepted Bradley.

Quite an accomplishment to be able to say "The End." Well done.

As Cash turned the knob, he was shoved inside,(. Off-balance) off-balance when the door shut, he caught himself on the edge of the tub.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014

I had it that way to start when, then I had somebody proof read it for me and they suggested I change it. I will go back. Thank you for your help.