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Savannah Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 98 "CHAPTER TWENTYONE; PART TWO"
Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

39 total reviews 
Comment from Selina Stambi
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A wonderful ending - after all the trials, drama and adventure!

I never expected Cash to muster the courage to ask her.

Good for him. Here comes the bride ... hurrah!

Wonderful job, Barbara. This was a huge project. Do you have plans for publication?

Love,

Sonali

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I'll be editing it this summer and then publishing it.
Comment from Sasha
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a super ending! I really wasn't expecting this at all, but love it. Cash and Paige were meant for each other from the first moment they met. Pretty nice of Bradley to step in and give Cash a gentle (maybe not so gentle) nudge. Great work with this one. I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Hareem.S
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I love how the story is progressing. Your chapters are always so impeccable. They have adequate details, well structured dialogues and most importantly a great plot.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving the kind review.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"Paige, I love you. Will you marry me?" He removed an opal and diamond ring from his pocket. "This is the ring Bradley gave Alice." - Yes, yes, yes, about dang time!

No, no, no, this can't be the end. I'm already going through withdrawal. What about the Walker family, and their reaction to Paige donating the treasure? Is Billy Joe gonna be the best man? Will Bradley show up at the wedding? I need more - sigh.

Rant done, this was too kewl a read. You really are so talented. Thanks for taking me on the ride.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving such an encouraging review. I love it. I have a new novel in the works. I hope you stick around for it.
reply by NaughtieScribe on 09-Jun-2014
    OOO a new novel, yay, I'll forgive you now. Uhm so when do I get to see the first chapter? Just asking.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    not sure, I am documenting the characters right now. I may just post that, I never have before. We'll see.
Comment from kiwijenny
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Awwww...he believes in Bradley....who gave him a ring.....fabulous ending...in a proposal....my hubby has yet to do that...he never proposed ...I must get him to,read how it's done ...is it a relief to be done or sad?
God bless

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    I will miss my characters, but I have another idea and will start it very soon. Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review.
reply by kiwijenny on 09-Jun-2014
    Good
Comment from Writingfundimension
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A well-deserved six for this novel, Barbara. I love how you ended this with a marriage proposal prompted by the ghost of Bradley. Nice to know there might be wedding planners on the other side. Great job, as always. :) Bev

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review.
reply by Writingfundimension on 09-Jun-2014
    You're very welcome, Barbara! :) Bev
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi Barbara,

I think a six for a very unusual proposal and acceptance. They finally got there - with a shove or three from a certain ornery old goat of a ghost.

Well done.

Patrick

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    I couldn't see it any other way. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from LIJ Red
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Not having read any of the rest of the tale,I assume the boldface is a ghost speaker and Morgan is a pet of some kind and Amos and Billy Joe are Boston socialites. The rest is obvious. I hope those two guys live happily ever after.
How'm I doing so far? Just kidding. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Sorta okay.
Comment from Zue65
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Wow a romantic ending for the two love birds, Cash and Paige. I have missed the action in your story. I started reading the posts only today, and I enjoyed the final chapter in the story of Paige. Thanks for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Liandra
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Even though I haven't I haven't read your previous chapters, I do remember though, reading the first couple.

You give the characters life and with their dialogue along with the description, certainly brought the story alive for me.

I'll look for your next novel.

:) Liandra

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.