Savannah Love
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Comment from AprilShower
I had to stop by and read the end of you book, Barbara. Oh, my! Your characters have been prim and proper until the ending. The ending is a bit shocking.
Well done, my friend.
Sorry about being late reading this. My husband has been very sick. Doctors, hospital, worry, and extra work is taking up all my time.
April
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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I had to stop by and read the end of you book, Barbara. Oh, my! Your characters have been prim and proper until the ending. The ending is a bit shocking.
Well done, my friend.
Sorry about being late reading this. My husband has been very sick. Doctors, hospital, worry, and extra work is taking up all my time.
April
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this review. You and your husband are in my prayers.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I realize I haven't read any of this story, but couldn't resist reading the ending. I can tell it was a good story. Lots of good elements: romance, conflict, perhaps a ghost?
Congratulations on finishing a book. Now comes the extra-fun part; finding a company to publish it. Best of luck. (Mastery has had some success.)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I realize I haven't read any of this story, but couldn't resist reading the ending. I can tell it was a good story. Lots of good elements: romance, conflict, perhaps a ghost?
Congratulations on finishing a book. Now comes the extra-fun part; finding a company to publish it. Best of luck. (Mastery has had some success.)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for your support. Yes, a ghost. I have one book published by gandj publishers. It can be found on amazon.com, the title is Two Tattered Hearts. It's a young mother's struggle getting out of an abusive relationship and in the process finds love.
Comment from rama devi
What a cute proposal--sweet and well-described. Good pacing. Good authentic-sounding dialog--especially with diction (like Amos). No issues of spags noticed, but I have one suggestion:
"Remember when we were all in the tunnel, I heard something,(THIS COMMA NOT MANDATORY) and left for a few minutes?"
This makes a satisfying closing to the story. It's nice that they will marry and that he believes in Bradley. :)
Good luck with editing this, getting it published and with your next novel! (Do let me know if you're looking for an affordable editor or proofreader for final drafts--unless you already have one, of course).
Warm Wishes,
rd
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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What a cute proposal--sweet and well-described. Good pacing. Good authentic-sounding dialog--especially with diction (like Amos). No issues of spags noticed, but I have one suggestion:
"Remember when we were all in the tunnel, I heard something,(THIS COMMA NOT MANDATORY) and left for a few minutes?"
This makes a satisfying closing to the story. It's nice that they will marry and that he believes in Bradley. :)
Good luck with editing this, getting it published and with your next novel! (Do let me know if you're looking for an affordable editor or proofreader for final drafts--unless you already have one, of course).
Warm Wishes,
rd
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I have used Brooke before and will probably go back with her.
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Oh good...that'll work well, She knows her grammar! :)
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Congratulations Barbara!! Thanks for all the enjoyable moments of reading. This is an excellent novel, and I'll be waiting to start the next one at the beginning.
Love the ending!! God bless you my dear friend.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Congratulations Barbara!! Thanks for all the enjoyable moments of reading. This is an excellent novel, and I'll be waiting to start the next one at the beginning.
Love the ending!! God bless you my dear friend.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Congratulations...how wonderful it is that you have finished posting your book! The ending is as it should be...Sappy sweet like a Southern Peach....Stephanie
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Congratulations...how wonderful it is that you have finished posting your book! The ending is as it should be...Sappy sweet like a Southern Peach....Stephanie
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from bob cullen
Isn't reaching the end of a novel the greatest experience. I know in my experience I fell both lost and happy. Happy that its completed and lost because I'll no longer be with friends, my characters and I always seem to develop a great friendship.
Now comes the hard part, my friend. Trying to find an agent or a publisher. I see Mastery from this site has just had some good fortune in this regard. That proves there is always hope. Good hunting.
I wish you well.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Isn't reaching the end of a novel the greatest experience. I know in my experience I fell both lost and happy. Happy that its completed and lost because I'll no longer be with friends, my characters and I always seem to develop a great friendship.
Now comes the hard part, my friend. Trying to find an agent or a publisher. I see Mastery from this site has just had some good fortune in this regard. That proves there is always hope. Good hunting.
I wish you well.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I have missed you. I'm glad o hear you're doing all right. I am in the process of editing this one then I will try to get it published.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm a sucker for happy endings and especially those mushy chick types, but tell anyone, it'll spoil my image of a rough ole country boy. I wish I had been with you for the whole book as I enjoyed every chapter that I read. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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I'm a sucker for happy endings and especially those mushy chick types, but tell anyone, it'll spoil my image of a rough ole country boy. I wish I had been with you for the whole book as I enjoyed every chapter that I read. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Hopefully it will be published and you can read the entire book.
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Sounds like a good deal. I'll be looking forward to it. Best of Luck!
Comment from MM lives on :)
Wow Barbara I sure wish I had of caught this book a little sooner in its life. I'm not on here much but I enjoyed reading through and through. Thank you for the previous chapter notes as well as sharing your writing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Wow Barbara I sure wish I had of caught this book a little sooner in its life. I'm not on here much but I enjoyed reading through and through. Thank you for the previous chapter notes as well as sharing your writing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
This is an delightful ending, Barbara. Have you determined who's going to publish it? I want to buy an advanced copy if that's possible. Congrats on putting together one of the best yarns on FS or anywhere else.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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This is an delightful ending, Barbara. Have you determined who's going to publish it? I want to buy an advanced copy if that's possible. Congrats on putting together one of the best yarns on FS or anywhere else.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from abbasjoy
I was wondering when Cash was going to pop the question. And, what do you know? He finally believes in ghosts.
This is a well written chapter to round off the tale with Cash asking for Paige's hand in marriage, and in a most unconventional manner. That one's for the books.
Well done. It was a great story.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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I was wondering when Cash was going to pop the question. And, what do you know? He finally believes in ghosts.
This is a well written chapter to round off the tale with Cash asking for Paige's hand in marriage, and in a most unconventional manner. That one's for the books.
Well done. It was a great story.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I couldn't imagine Cash and Bradley doing it any other way.
