Savannah Love
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Comment from Janie King
Oh I like the way this is headed for sure. I've been so busy I haven't had time to read or post. I spent Thursday in ER for lymphdema issues and we spent all day in Er with Krystals sever vaginal bleeding of unknown etiology and the computer has been being fgoofy. I gotta get back on track. Great chapter. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Oh I like the way this is headed for sure. I've been so busy I haven't had time to read or post. I spent Thursday in ER for lymphdema issues and we spent all day in Er with Krystals sever vaginal bleeding of unknown etiology and the computer has been being fgoofy. I gotta get back on track. Great chapter. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I appreciate you dropping by and leaving the kind review. Prayers headed your direction.
Comment from Hareem.S
This is another good chapter of your novel. I like the plot and how the story is progressing. The dialogues are very good and engagaing and kept me glued till the end.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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This is another good chapter of your novel. I like the plot and how the story is progressing. The dialogues are very good and engagaing and kept me glued till the end.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving the kind review.
Comment from jjstar
Just love Bradley giving Cash instructions on how to win his lady love. You've done a super job weaving the words of the old ghost into the lighthearted quips and retorts throughout the dialogue. Just great! Seems like the story is coming to a head and there is a sense of urgency I'm feeling from Bradly pushing..love it!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Just love Bradley giving Cash instructions on how to win his lady love. You've done a super job weaving the words of the old ghost into the lighthearted quips and retorts throughout the dialogue. Just great! Seems like the story is coming to a head and there is a sense of urgency I'm feeling from Bradly pushing..love it!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I appreciate you dropping by and leaving this great review.
Comment from elgone
So bradley is talking to Cash now, giving him advice on how to treat Paige. Does Cash realize it is Bradley talking to him or does he think it is Billy Joe. He seems to know.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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So bradley is talking to Cash now, giving him advice on how to treat Paige. Does Cash realize it is Bradley talking to him or does he think it is Billy Joe. He seems to know.
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Cash knows its Bradley. He had an experience with Bradley in the tunnel that will come out later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from angelface2
I am so glad everyone got out without getting hurt. I wonder who the young man (skeleton) is. I wish Paige would keep the beautiful brooch. I think she deserves it. Nicely written, Barbara. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I am so glad everyone got out without getting hurt. I wonder who the young man (skeleton) is. I wish Paige would keep the beautiful brooch. I think she deserves it. Nicely written, Barbara. Miss Sally
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
I enjoyed your post very much. I guess the next mystery would be the skeleton. I did see one spag; "Isn't these beautiful....", should be "this". I've enjoyed the novel and will be sure to look for the next one. Best wishes--Ted
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Dear Barbra,
I enjoyed your post very much. I guess the next mystery would be the skeleton. I did see one spag; "Isn't these beautiful....", should be "this". I've enjoyed the novel and will be sure to look for the next one. Best wishes--Ted
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I appreciate you dropping by and leaving the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent story. Shaping up to keep the reader interested. I suppose the skeleton is Bradley, if not it will miss an opportunity. Well done school teacher. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Excellent story. Shaping up to keep the reader interested. I suppose the skeleton is Bradley, if not it will miss an opportunity. Well done school teacher. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I appreciate you dropping by and leaving the kind review Bradley died on the Civil War battle field.
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Im hooked
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha! What a great chapter! Now Cash can hear Bradley too, and the ghost is giving him a little nudge, hmm? I LOVE that Paige wants the others to take their pick of three items, too - it's so sweet and generous! (May I have that beautiful pearl and diamond brooch? LOL.)
Just one thing I noticed - isn't it CSI (for crime Scene Investigation)?
Fabulous reading, Barbara - pure adventure!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Hahahaha! What a great chapter! Now Cash can hear Bradley too, and the ghost is giving him a little nudge, hmm? I LOVE that Paige wants the others to take their pick of three items, too - it's so sweet and generous! (May I have that beautiful pearl and diamond brooch? LOL.)
Just one thing I noticed - isn't it CSI (for crime Scene Investigation)?
Fabulous reading, Barbara - pure adventure!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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I can't believe I did that. CIS us curriculum instruction specialist. Oh my!!! LOL Thank you for catching that.
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:) Easy to do - I do that stuff too. LOL. You're welcome.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Stranger! LOL...So good to see your work again. It
s a pleasure believe me. I am not active on FS yet. Just thought I'd peak in and visit a few friends. I am busdy sending out queries, synopsis etc for my book. I have sent out 46 and am just about done with the "Agent's Guide for 20124, so will be back soon while I wait for some news bad or good.
I did notice one small thiong you might consider: "ice tea" I thoink should be "iced tea" See you soon. X0 Bob
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Hi, Stranger! LOL...So good to see your work again. It
s a pleasure believe me. I am not active on FS yet. Just thought I'd peak in and visit a few friends. I am busdy sending out queries, synopsis etc for my book. I have sent out 46 and am just about done with the "Agent's Guide for 20124, so will be back soon while I wait for some news bad or good.
I did notice one small thiong you might consider: "ice tea" I thoink should be "iced tea" See you soon. X0 Bob
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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I will pray that a publisher will realize how great your book is.
Comment from Writingfundimension
I love that Bradley. He's a real guardian angel for Paige. And speaking of her, she's a real classy lady to let everyone have a part of the treasure that's rightfully hers. This great chapter is very well written! :) Bev
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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I love that Bradley. He's a real guardian angel for Paige. And speaking of her, she's a real classy lady to let everyone have a part of the treasure that's rightfully hers. This great chapter is very well written! :) Bev
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving the wonderful review.
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You're very welcome, Barbara. I love your characters! :)
