Savannah Love
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, Barbara, you did an excellent job w riting this chapter where the team makes it out alive and paige wants the treasure gone from her house. I like how she wants to share the treasure and donate the rest. one error, unless you meant to have it for the vernacular. Isn't this beautiful instead of Isn't these beautiful
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
this is very well written, Barbara, you did an excellent job w riting this chapter where the team makes it out alive and paige wants the treasure gone from her house. I like how she wants to share the treasure and donate the rest. one error, unless you meant to have it for the vernacular. Isn't this beautiful instead of Isn't these beautiful
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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Comment from A Matter Of Words
What a beautiful broach. I would put it on a chain and wear it a necklace! Bradley did a good job of goading Cash into action. Loved that he followed him out of the room. Well-penned, Barbara.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
What a beautiful broach. I would put it on a chain and wear it a necklace! Bradley did a good job of goading Cash into action. Loved that he followed him out of the room. Well-penned, Barbara.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving the kind review.
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Your are most welcome. I look forward to the last chapter.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the chapter. I love the story. They have a treasure. Some think it was not worth the effort and lost. They have found a body, probably one who ought the treasure too. Great work.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
I love the chapter. I love the story. They have a treasure. Some think it was not worth the effort and lost. They have found a body, probably one who ought the treasure too. Great work.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Comment from freepass
Very good read,keep up the good work.
keep writing. Dialogue is great!
And I liked it !!
For 5 Stars*****
Good going!!!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
Very good read,keep up the good work.
keep writing. Dialogue is great!
And I liked it !!
For 5 Stars*****
Good going!!!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter of "Savannah Love". The though of there only being another chapter or two makes me wonder if there is going to be any significance to the skeleton's identity, as you leave us readers guessing. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter of "Savannah Love". The though of there only being another chapter or two makes me wonder if there is going to be any significance to the skeleton's identity, as you leave us readers guessing. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb
I like how in this chapter of how you are very close to the end of your novel.
One thing I forgot who died I noticed it when you were talking about the coroner?
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
Hi Barb
I like how in this chapter of how you are very close to the end of your novel.
One thing I forgot who died I noticed it when you were talking about the coroner?
Gert
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I appreciate you dropping by and leaving the kind review. I don't know who died. It's about the skeleton in the root cellar.
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I see I should of realized.
Gert
Comment from lindalcreel
I'm so glad she is going to give the treasure to a museum; she doesn't need the money. But Cash really needs to get over his phobia about her wealth and just love for the girl she is. This has been a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
I'm so glad she is going to give the treasure to a museum; she doesn't need the money. But Cash really needs to get over his phobia about her wealth and just love for the girl she is. This has been a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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My pleasure:)
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Very, very good dialouge. It kept me in the game. I see that you use it to move the story along....good jb Keep it going.... very powerful.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
Very, very good dialouge. It kept me in the game. I see that you use it to move the story along....good jb Keep it going.... very powerful.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
I'm wondering if the laws of 'Treasure Trove' are the same in the US as in the UK. A 'treasure trove here would have to be declared and handed over to the British Museum for evaluation and would then be 'purchased' by the Crown for up to 50% of the value. Even found on my own land. It's to prevent valuable artefacts being 'lost' to private collectors, as so much was in the 18th and 19th Centuries. The Museum is obliged to display the items of course.
Bradley seems to be giving Cash a bit of a shove now. It seems he needs it ... Or Bradley is just being naughty.
Patrick
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
Hi Barbara,
I'm wondering if the laws of 'Treasure Trove' are the same in the US as in the UK. A 'treasure trove here would have to be declared and handed over to the British Museum for evaluation and would then be 'purchased' by the Crown for up to 50% of the value. Even found on my own land. It's to prevent valuable artefacts being 'lost' to private collectors, as so much was in the 18th and 19th Centuries. The Museum is obliged to display the items of course.
Bradley seems to be giving Cash a bit of a shove now. It seems he needs it ... Or Bradley is just being naughty.
Patrick
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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I appreciate you dropping by and leaving the kind review. Bradley is a stinker. I need to research these laws. Oh dear. Thanks for the heads up.
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Yes, the 'finders, keepers' rule doesn't apply to treasure troves ...
Patrick
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - I loved this post, now that Bradley is having fun with Cash I expect some sparks to fly. Nicely penned and great imagery, emotion on the characters was humorous too. I liked it:)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
Dear Barbara - I loved this post, now that Bradley is having fun with Cash I expect some sparks to fly. Nicely penned and great imagery, emotion on the characters was humorous too. I liked it:)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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