Savannah Love
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Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I'm glad you made it safely home from the wwedding.
This is another great chapter as the story comes together. I thought everyone was out safely, but now I still have to worry about the rescue squad.
So they finely found the Civil War treasure and Cash is starting to believe in ghosts. Speaking of ghosts, could the skeleton belong to Bradley Bookman?
I'm low on stars, but as always, I offer you lots of love and Irish Hugs.
Roger
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Hi Barbara:)
I'm glad you made it safely home from the wwedding.
This is another great chapter as the story comes together. I thought everyone was out safely, but now I still have to worry about the rescue squad.
So they finely found the Civil War treasure and Cash is starting to believe in ghosts. Speaking of ghosts, could the skeleton belong to Bradley Bookman?
I'm low on stars, but as always, I offer you lots of love and Irish Hugs.
Roger
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Not a problem about the stars, I just enjoy you dropping by. I have no idea who the skeleton belongs too, but I doubt it's Bradley. He was killed at Chickamauga, but who knows.
Comment from Writingfundimension
I'm not shocked at all, Barbara. We're in the same boat LoL.
How cool... a treasure is actually found. Lots of excitement and brisk pace to make a very enjoyable addition to your story. Well done!
:) Bev
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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I'm not shocked at all, Barbara. We're in the same boat LoL.
How cool... a treasure is actually found. Lots of excitement and brisk pace to make a very enjoyable addition to your story. Well done!
:) Bev
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving a great review.
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You're very welcome, barbara.
Comment from adewpearl
I'm so glad to hear the wedding was perfect, my friend :-)
This certainly is an exciting chapter - cave ins and ghosts and hidden treasure and danger - nobody is going to fall asleep while reading this chapter. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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I'm so glad to hear the wedding was perfect, my friend :-)
This certainly is an exciting chapter - cave ins and ghosts and hidden treasure and danger - nobody is going to fall asleep while reading this chapter. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and writing a great review.
Comment from judiverse
This is great, and I'm going with six stars. You've done a great job of putting things together and keeping the readers guessing. I knew there had to be a treasure in there. The rock slide is a threat, and you leave us wondering what has happened to the rescue crew. Will they be trapped in the tunnel? It's great that Morgan sniffing around drew their attention to the treasure. I'm sure Paige will see that it is used for good. judi
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This is great, and I'm going with six stars. You've done a great job of putting things together and keeping the readers guessing. I knew there had to be a treasure in there. The rock slide is a threat, and you leave us wondering what has happened to the rescue crew. Will they be trapped in the tunnel? It's great that Morgan sniffing around drew their attention to the treasure. I'm sure Paige will see that it is used for good. judi
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving such a good review. I appreciate both.
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You're so welcome. Glad you're ready to bring it home. judi
Comment from Sankey
have enjoyed it all mate. Especially the Dialogue even the ole Negro component hehe. Great work interested about the treasure. Can't wait for these "final??" haha chapters.
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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have enjoyed it all mate. Especially the Dialogue even the ole Negro component hehe. Great work interested about the treasure. Can't wait for these "final??" haha chapters.
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Thank your for dropping by and leaving such a kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to see how the book ends.
"The rocks and dirt block (blocked) the tunnel.
Come on(,) follow me.
I have (a) bad feeling about this." He glanced over his shoulder,(no comma) before he picked up Paige.
Cash brushed a kiss a crossed (across) her forehead.
Mary Pat leaned the crutched (crutches) against the wall.
"I think its (it's) right here.
Cash and Billy Joe's glanced (glances) switched between the two women.
"Good(,) you're all safely back."
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Good chapter, Barbara. It will be interesting to see how the book ends.
"The rocks and dirt block (blocked) the tunnel.
Come on(,) follow me.
I have (a) bad feeling about this." He glanced over his shoulder,(no comma) before he picked up Paige.
Cash brushed a kiss a crossed (across) her forehead.
Mary Pat leaned the crutched (crutches) against the wall.
"I think its (it's) right here.
Cash and Billy Joe's glanced (glances) switched between the two women.
"Good(,) you're all safely back."
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Two of your suggestions I had that way and my spell/grammar checker through a fit so I changed. I have changed them back. Thank you for keeping me honest. It's surprising how few people catch my mistakes.
Comment from Ben Colder
Good write. Now comes the treasure and fun trying to see who gets what. Glad the wedding went off great. So, got you another brand new daughter? Blessings to all.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Good write. Now comes the treasure and fun trying to see who gets what. Glad the wedding went off great. So, got you another brand new daughter? Blessings to all.
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Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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She's a wonderful lady. It's amazing how I have been blessed with three wonderful daughter-in-laws. Thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful review.
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Oh no problem just stumbled in out of the cave for a minute. lol.
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I seriously doubt that. LOL
Comment from c_lucas
Never apologize for your work. The sixer is my way of saving "very good job." I am glad you have fun marrying off Number three son. Good job for all.
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Never apologize for your work. The sixer is my way of saving "very good job." I am glad you have fun marrying off Number three son. Good job for all.
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sasha
This is a terrific chapter. I enjoyed it very much. They found the treasure and got out safely. I am thrilled you had a good time at the wedding and look forward to reading your posts about it.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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This is a terrific chapter. I enjoyed it very much. They found the treasure and got out safely. I am thrilled you had a good time at the wedding and look forward to reading your posts about it.
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Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 27-May-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and the kind review.
