Savannah Love
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - this was some great writing, great dialogue and overall a strong post for your story. Keeps getting better - I loved this one.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Dear Barbara - this was some great writing, great dialogue and overall a strong post for your story. Keeps getting better - I loved this one.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 29-May-2014
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Comment from abbasjoy
Wow! Excitement galore in this post. Finally, the treasure is real and they actually found it. Glad all came through safely, but now the rescue squad is going to be in trouble from the sounds of it.
This chapter moves along quickly and lots of action.
Loved it, and looking forward hopefully to see the rescue squad rescued. How's that for irony?
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Wow! Excitement galore in this post. Finally, the treasure is real and they actually found it. Glad all came through safely, but now the rescue squad is going to be in trouble from the sounds of it.
This chapter moves along quickly and lots of action.
Loved it, and looking forward hopefully to see the rescue squad rescued. How's that for irony?
Comment Written 29-May-2014
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Comment from lindalcreel
So, there really was a treasure. My bet is that Paige is going to share it with her friends and maybe the old man who helped them. She doesn't need the money and it could sure come in handy for some of the others. So glad the wedding was great. Glad to have you back.
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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So, there really was a treasure. My bet is that Paige is going to share it with her friends and maybe the old man who helped them. She doesn't need the money and it could sure come in handy for some of the others. So glad the wedding was great. Glad to have you back.
Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from Jay Squires
If there's one more chapter you're goin' out with a roar! They've got to risk their lives to go back for the rescue party, then all that cleanup we novelists have to do.
This was a great read, Barbara.
Mary Pat and I found another entrance." [Another entrance, or another exit? If they're inside, it seems it would be an exit. Yeah, yeah, I know... One person's entrance is another's exit.]
"Ya youn'uns get dem."["young'uns"??]
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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If there's one more chapter you're goin' out with a roar! They've got to risk their lives to go back for the rescue party, then all that cleanup we novelists have to do.
This was a great read, Barbara.
Mary Pat and I found another entrance." [Another entrance, or another exit? If they're inside, it seems it would be an exit. Yeah, yeah, I know... One person's entrance is another's exit.]
"Ya youn'uns get dem."["young'uns"??]
Comment Written 28-May-2014
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check those areas.
Comment from Norbanus
+Morgan sure earned his kibbles today, sniffing the rocks to find the treasure, trotting ahead and being available for Nala to give a bowl of water. Lots of supporting action something akin to comic relief from the stressful situation. Outstanding!
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+Morgan sure earned his kibbles today, sniffing the rocks to find the treasure, trotting ahead and being available for Nala to give a bowl of water. Lots of supporting action something akin to comic relief from the stressful situation. Outstanding!
Comment Written 28-May-2014
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Now, I'm just wondering how many of those gold bricks were left in the tunnel. I guess that makes me a typical, greedy, human. You know, I kind that would get trapped while trying to get every last brick. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Now, I'm just wondering how many of those gold bricks were left in the tunnel. I guess that makes me a typical, greedy, human. You know, I kind that would get trapped while trying to get every last brick. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 28-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
You're surely not going to let the rescuers get killed? So there was a treasure for real. Now I wonder of Bradley is going to show up at the end,. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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You're surely not going to let the rescuers get killed? So there was a treasure for real. Now I wonder of Bradley is going to show up at the end,. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb I'm al lout of sixes
I liked your way of telling us what was going on in the cave(actually made me feel if I was there)
Now the mystery what is going to happen with the treasure of jewels found.
Gert
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Hi Barb I'm al lout of sixes
I liked your way of telling us what was going on in the cave(actually made me feel if I was there)
Now the mystery what is going to happen with the treasure of jewels found.
Gert
Comment Written 28-May-2014
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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smiles Barb
Gert
Comment from Auroraboreal800
The dialogues are what I most enjoy it... I can see the connection between the previous chapter and this one, but, the suspense is killing me. So glad about the wedding's good news!
Wonderful job Barbara!
:)
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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The dialogues are what I most enjoy it... I can see the connection between the previous chapter and this one, but, the suspense is killing me. So glad about the wedding's good news!
Wonderful job Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 28-May-2014
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Comment from Cajungirl
They got the treasure and got just in time. But too bad they didn't know that a rescue squad were looking for them. i sure everyone is alright. Excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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They got the treasure and got just in time. But too bad they didn't know that a rescue squad were looking for them. i sure everyone is alright. Excellent chapter.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
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