Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 95 "CHAPTER TWENTY; PART FOUR"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Sasha
thanks for letting us know you won't be posting next week. Have a great time at your son's wedding and know that we are all sitting on the edge of our seats waiting to find out what happens next. Great chapter, I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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thanks for letting us know you won't be posting next week. Have a great time at your son's wedding and know that we are all sitting on the edge of our seats waiting to find out what happens next. Great chapter, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Jay Squires
Thoroughly enjoyable, as usual, Barbara.
"Unless you're in a tunnel that could cave-in any second. [Good for building suspense!]
There hasn't been any other choices." [Of course, to be correct, "There haven't." I don't know your character's grammar savvy.]
"Whatever that is, it sound good. [it sounds good.]
Wishing your son the best in his marriage, from all us at FanStory.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thoroughly enjoyable, as usual, Barbara.
"Unless you're in a tunnel that could cave-in any second. [Good for building suspense!]
There hasn't been any other choices." [Of course, to be correct, "There haven't." I don't know your character's grammar savvy.]
"Whatever that is, it sound good. [it sounds good.]
Wishing your son the best in his marriage, from all us at FanStory.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I will get on those corrections.
Comment from Sankey
Another great chapter. Look forward to see where this is going. No spags! Yay! Definitely lots of intrigue and suspense in there.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Another great chapter. Look forward to see where this is going. No spags! Yay! Definitely lots of intrigue and suspense in there.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
OK, so now it looks as if you've reunited them all, located the possible treasure hiding place and a skeleton (Bradley himself?) and getting set to trap them all again!
Nice - and then you tell us you won't be posting the next chapter until next week?
Hope the wedding goes well, I guess we'll just have to be patient.
Patrick
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Hi Barbara,
OK, so now it looks as if you've reunited them all, located the possible treasure hiding place and a skeleton (Bradley himself?) and getting set to trap them all again!
Nice - and then you tell us you won't be posting the next chapter until next week?
Hope the wedding goes well, I guess we'll just have to be patient.
Patrick
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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I will be writing in the car. The wedding is about 16 hours one way away. I hope to post as soon as I get back, but can't promise. Thank you for dropping by.
Comment from lancellot
You end it in a cliff hanger, where life and death hangs in the air. Great idea, I would have done that too. :)
The women stopped in their tracks as {they} eyes widened.
-Are you sure about this usage. I only mention it because you used 'their' earlier.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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You end it in a cliff hanger, where life and death hangs in the air. Great idea, I would have done that too. :)
The women stopped in their tracks as {they} eyes widened.
-Are you sure about this usage. I only mention it because you used 'their' earlier.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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You're right about the they. I have fixed it. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from c_lucas
That's what happens when the tunnel was built without a license contractor. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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That's what happens when the tunnel was built without a license contractor. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
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Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
Well, I guess I can forgive you for attending your son's wedding and choosing him over me. LOL
Lots of suspense and excitement in this chapter - excellent dialogue that conveys the emotions of your characters. And it's interesting to see Cash is indicating his beliefs might be changing :-) Love the skeleton, by the way. Brooke
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reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Well, I guess I can forgive you for attending your son's wedding and choosing him over me. LOL
Lots of suspense and excitement in this chapter - excellent dialogue that conveys the emotions of your characters. And it's interesting to see Cash is indicating his beliefs might be changing :-) Love the skeleton, by the way. Brooke
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Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I am thinking Andrew would have chosen to go to the JP. He's getting tired of wedding things.
