Savannah Love
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
Well, sorta. He might chew on him. Dogs like bones." - LMAO!
Oh great now everybody's trapped in the tunnels, at least they have each other, until the air runs out. Maybe by then even Billy Joe will believe in ghosts. Especially if he becomes one. lol. This was a kewl chapter with a wicked sense of humor. Onward.
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Well, sorta. He might chew on him. Dogs like bones." - LMAO!
Oh great now everybody's trapped in the tunnels, at least they have each other, until the air runs out. Maybe by then even Billy Joe will believe in ghosts. Especially if he becomes one. lol. This was a kewl chapter with a wicked sense of humor. Onward.
Comment Written 27-May-2014
reply by the author on 31-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I had to add a little humor. LOL
Comment from Hareem.S
Even though I have not read the rest of the book, I really like reading this chapter. It is very vividly penned down and hence it kept me glued till the end.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Even though I have not read the rest of the book, I really like reading this chapter. It is very vividly penned down and hence it kept me glued till the end.
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from angelface2
Excellent, Barbara. I truly love the excitement in this story. the ghost of Bradley is wonderful. Even the dog, but I think he should have sniffed the skeleton. Maybe he could have discovered the lever and pulled on it or something. LOL. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Excellent, Barbara. I truly love the excitement in this story. the ghost of Bradley is wonderful. Even the dog, but I think he should have sniffed the skeleton. Maybe he could have discovered the lever and pulled on it or something. LOL. Miss Sally
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of another great chapter that, as usual, leaves us readers with more questions than when we began reading the chapter. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of another great chapter that, as usual, leaves us readers with more questions than when we began reading the chapter. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Adi
I loved your story very very very very very very very very very very very very very much that`s why I gave it 5 stars.
If I could I would give it 1000000000 stars.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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I loved your story very very very very very very very very very very very very very much that`s why I gave it 5 stars.
If I could I would give it 1000000000 stars.
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the stars.
Comment from A.R. Curry
This is some good stuff. Even though it's not stand alone, I didn't have trouble following it. I would suggest to tone it back a bit on the dialogue attributes and whatnot (a lot of descriptions about what the talkers are doing that, when overwhelming, take away from what's being said), but it's not "bad" by any means. Just a suggestion.
Curry
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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This is some good stuff. Even though it's not stand alone, I didn't have trouble following it. I would suggest to tone it back a bit on the dialogue attributes and whatnot (a lot of descriptions about what the talkers are doing that, when overwhelming, take away from what's being said), but it's not "bad" by any means. Just a suggestion.
Curry
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JB Lynn
"I'm trying to help." Hehe...I can almost hear the aggravation in this statement!
I have to say, I really enjoy reading Bradley's "voice". Although there's no body language to "read", you're a whiz at using his statements to help convey his emotion. That's got to be hard to do.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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"I'm trying to help." Hehe...I can almost hear the aggravation in this statement!
I have to say, I really enjoy reading Bradley's "voice". Although there's no body language to "read", you're a whiz at using his statements to help convey his emotion. That's got to be hard to do.
Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where bradley leads paige and mary pat to their men and then there's another cave in
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where bradley leads paige and mary pat to their men and then there's another cave in
Comment Written 20-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Wonderful dialogues, as usual. Love this chapter, with all this suspense and action. Seems Cash may eventually change his beliefs. Enjoy the trip and the wedding, oh boy I love weddings!
Excellent job Barbara!
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Wonderful dialogues, as usual. Love this chapter, with all this suspense and action. Seems Cash may eventually change his beliefs. Enjoy the trip and the wedding, oh boy I love weddings!
Excellent job Barbara!
Comment Written 20-May-2014
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, your third son getting married. Wow. You're gathering girls now. Nice.
Loved this chapter and relieved that the boys are eventually out of these risky tunnels. Hope all of them get out safely now. luv jada
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Hi Barbie, your third son getting married. Wow. You're gathering girls now. Nice.
Loved this chapter and relieved that the boys are eventually out of these risky tunnels. Hope all of them get out safely now. luv jada
Comment Written 20-May-2014
