Savannah Love
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Comment from adewpearl
is he, boy? - add comma for direct address
Wonderful meeting and conversation with Bradley - you've given him a very likable personality
Lots of drama with Cash now missing in the tunnel - I can't wait for Bradley to rescue him! :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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is he, boy? - add comma for direct address
Wonderful meeting and conversation with Bradley - you've given him a very likable personality
Lots of drama with Cash now missing in the tunnel - I can't wait for Bradley to rescue him! :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I can't say what Bradley is going to do. He doesn't tell me until the last minute. I am not used to that. I usually know months in advance. I will add the comma.
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well, tell Bradley that I've been counting on Cash and Paige having a happy, romantic ending for a long time now, so it's time for him to do his part in a good-natured way! ;-)
Comment from Sankey
So glad you are back. Missed you. How is your son doing? I think you said he had hurt himself or something? Glad to be back on your fantastic story.
Only one little spag. Bradley chuck(l)ed.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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So glad you are back. Missed you. How is your son doing? I think you said he had hurt himself or something? Glad to be back on your fantastic story.
Only one little spag. Bradley chuck(l)ed.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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My son is doing all right. Thank you for asking. I appreciate your kind review and I will correct that little issue. I guess we don't want Bradley to chuck anything. LOL
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Just glad you are back. Suffering the old writer's block myself atm. Keep up the good work.
Comment from judiverse
This is really exciting. Bradley is such a mysterious ghost, and seems to appear and disappear at will. At least he has good intentions, and Morgan isn't afraid of him. Good explanation that he's disappeared because he's lost power temporarily. Funny exchange about Paige wanting to hug Bradley. Paige finally makes it to safety through the mud room. But Cash and Billy Joe are trapped now. Nala has the right answer about calling for the rescue squad. I have a feeling Bradley will put them onto some treasure before this is over. Great work. judi
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This is really exciting. Bradley is such a mysterious ghost, and seems to appear and disappear at will. At least he has good intentions, and Morgan isn't afraid of him. Good explanation that he's disappeared because he's lost power temporarily. Funny exchange about Paige wanting to hug Bradley. Paige finally makes it to safety through the mud room. But Cash and Billy Joe are trapped now. Nala has the right answer about calling for the rescue squad. I have a feeling Bradley will put them onto some treasure before this is over. Great work. judi
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I have know clue what Bradley is up to. He hasn't told me yet. The little stinker. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Norbanus
It's not surprising this yarn is taking a while. With interesting characters like you have running the show, they are not going to want it to end.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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It's not surprising this yarn is taking a while. With interesting characters like you have running the show, they are not going to want it to end.
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Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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NO they don't and they don't fill me into the what they are going to do until the last second. I am not used to that. I usually know months ahead of time. This bunch is a real handful. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara, and you left us hanging again!
Bradley chucked (chuckled).
This sentence needs a little work:
All heads turned toward the opening to the tunnel as a loud crashing sound, the floor trembled, and a large cloud of dust came through the door.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Good chapter, Barbara, and you left us hanging again!
Bradley chucked (chuckled).
This sentence needs a little work:
All heads turned toward the opening to the tunnel as a loud crashing sound, the floor trembled, and a large cloud of dust came through the door.
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Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I will fix that sentence. I have already fixed chucked. Thank you for bringing these to my attention.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like Cash will have to rebuild the tunnel/s in order for the home to get its authenticity rating. This is very well written.
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It looks like Cash will have to rebuild the tunnel/s in order for the home to get its authenticity rating. This is very well written.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I am not sure what Cash is going to do.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Writingfundimension
Great chapter, Barbara! I enjoyed all the interaction with Bradley's ghost. Now if he was able to get the attention of the naysayers, we can hope for a happy ending. Your dialogue is always very impressive, my friend.
:0) Bev
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Great chapter, Barbara! I enjoyed all the interaction with Bradley's ghost. Now if he was able to get the attention of the naysayers, we can hope for a happy ending. Your dialogue is always very impressive, my friend.
:0) Bev
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
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You're welcome, Barbara! xx
