Savannah Love
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
This chapter is a nice flowing read. I enjoyed all the interaction with Bradley's ghost. Excellent dialogues and excellent use of words, as well.
So glad to see you back Barbara, how is your son doing?
Regards, :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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This chapter is a nice flowing read. I enjoyed all the interaction with Bradley's ghost. Excellent dialogues and excellent use of words, as well.
So glad to see you back Barbara, how is your son doing?
Regards, :)
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Steven is doing okay, not perfect yet.
Comment from elgone
So Bradley helps Paige and Morgan get out of the tunnel o safety. But cash and company are still in the tunnels and the whole thing is caving in. Bradley goes back to help them.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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So Bradley helps Paige and Morgan get out of the tunnel o safety. But cash and company are still in the tunnels and the whole thing is caving in. Bradley goes back to help them.
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Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. HUGS I am glad to see you are still reading. How is your publishing going?
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24 more days until the official release. The editor is supposed to be completely finished by the 12th. I have a meeting tomorrow about the cover proofs. It seems like everything is rush, rush, rush at the last minute when a book is being publishing.
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Barbara, this is great! Lots of excitement and tension.
Just one thing, and it might be me, but Paige was calling for Morgan, thinking something was wrong because he "never leaves my side". Then Bradley reappeared, but we didn't see Morgan come back from wherever he went...?
I LOVED it though, and I can't wait 'til Paige can prove Bradley exists! :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Barbara, this is great! Lots of excitement and tension.
Just one thing, and it might be me, but Paige was calling for Morgan, thinking something was wrong because he "never leaves my side". Then Bradley reappeared, but we didn't see Morgan come back from wherever he went...?
I LOVED it though, and I can't wait 'til Paige can prove Bradley exists! :)
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Good point I will work on that.
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Always a pleasure, Barbara - this is a wonderful book!
Comment from angelface2
This has been a little bit confusing, but it sounds like they will be all right and the dog is out. Nice touch, the ghost. Now, just what has happened to Cash and Billy Joe. somehow I have a feeling they evaded the cave in. Nice chapter, Barbara. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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This has been a little bit confusing, but it sounds like they will be all right and the dog is out. Nice touch, the ghost. Now, just what has happened to Cash and Billy Joe. somehow I have a feeling they evaded the cave in. Nice chapter, Barbara. Miss Sally
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Oh this is so unfair. How can you leave me hanging like this? So Paige gets out (with the help of Bradley - I swear their relationship reminds me of "The Ghost & Mrs. Muir - the TV Show not the movie), and now Cash and Billy Joe are in need of a rescue. And oh by the way, do the happen to stumble upon the treasure while being buried alive? Goodness you just love keeping your reader (me) on the edge of me seat, shouting at the monitor. Uh! Luv ya anyway.
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Oh this is so unfair. How can you leave me hanging like this? So Paige gets out (with the help of Bradley - I swear their relationship reminds me of "The Ghost & Mrs. Muir - the TV Show not the movie), and now Cash and Billy Joe are in need of a rescue. And oh by the way, do the happen to stumble upon the treasure while being buried alive? Goodness you just love keeping your reader (me) on the edge of me seat, shouting at the monitor. Uh! Luv ya anyway.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. HUGS!!!!
Comment from Cajungirl
Excellent chapter, section. I am so very glad that Bradley helped Paige find her way back to the house. My only worry is what happened to Cash and the others. Will Bradley help them out? I guess I'll have to wait to read.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Excellent chapter, section. I am so very glad that Bradley helped Paige find her way back to the house. My only worry is what happened to Cash and the others. Will Bradley help them out? I guess I'll have to wait to read.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I am not sure what Bradley is up to. Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Janie King
oh I'm sure there's no way bradley is going to let anythiing happpen to rhe guys. very good chapter.God. they admitted krystal to the hospital on oxygen around the clock. I'm with her. more tests tomorrow. god loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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oh I'm sure there's no way bradley is going to let anythiing happpen to rhe guys. very good chapter.God. they admitted krystal to the hospital on oxygen around the clock. I'm with her. more tests tomorrow. god loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I will continue to pray for Krystal. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Your scene in the cave with Bradley and Morgan are so vivid.
I felt I was also in this mysterious cave.
Well written
Now you have me wondering whAt in the world is Bradley up to and trying to prove?
Gert
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Hello Barb
Your scene in the cave with Bradley and Morgan are so vivid.
I felt I was also in this mysterious cave.
Well written
Now you have me wondering whAt in the world is Bradley up to and trying to prove?
Gert
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I am wondering myself what Bradley is up to. My characters usually tell me months and months out. Bradley doesn't. Oh my!!! Thank you for the kind review.
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Smiles Barb
Well I waiting for what happens next.
Gert
Comment from Gungalo
It's good you reminded me that the men were still in the tunnel. Hopefully Paige will get them the help they need. Sigh the poor guys.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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It's good you reminded me that the men were still in the tunnel. Hopefully Paige will get them the help they need. Sigh the poor guys.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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Smile Barb.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
So Bradley will save Cash and Billy Joe! It'll be hard for the boys to deny his existence after this. Wonder about the treasure. :) nancy
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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So Bradley will save Cash and Billy Joe! It'll be hard for the boys to deny his existence after this. Wonder about the treasure. :) nancy
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I sure hope Bradley saves the boys. Thank you for the kind review.
