Savannah Love
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of another great chapter of the real and spirit world. Bradley leading Paige out of the tunnel and as usual you leaving us wondering what will happen next with Cash and the crew. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of another great chapter of the real and spirit world. Bradley leading Paige out of the tunnel and as usual you leaving us wondering what will happen next with Cash and the crew. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and giving me such a kind review.
Comment from emrpoems
Good dialogue
God intereaction between characters
Good story line and development allowing it to flow at a steady pace. Didn't get what happened to Bradley when he didapeared
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Good dialogue
God intereaction between characters
Good story line and development allowing it to flow at a steady pace. Didn't get what happened to Bradley when he didapeared
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Katzintx
New reader. If I was in a book store, flipped open to this section of the book and read, I would most likely buy the book to see what would happen next. Interesting and worth investigating .katz
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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New reader. If I was in a book store, flipped open to this section of the book and read, I would most likely buy the book to see what would happen next. Interesting and worth investigating .katz
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Thank you for the encouraging words. It made me smile.
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Barbra,
All was pretty good. However, there's a continuity problem; After Bradley shows her a secret door, the dog disappears. Then later he reappears with no mention of what happened or where he was etc. I really didn't see the need for disappearing unless it is some kind of plot point. You should review that section again. Great job overall--Ted
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Dear Barbra,
All was pretty good. However, there's a continuity problem; After Bradley shows her a secret door, the dog disappears. Then later he reappears with no mention of what happened or where he was etc. I really didn't see the need for disappearing unless it is some kind of plot point. You should review that section again. Great job overall--Ted
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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I will make that clear. Morgan found Bradley. Thank you for catching it.
Comment from lindalcreel
Paige got out, but I wonder if Bradley will be able to help Cash and his buddy. She never did find the treasure everyone was talking about, but I guess eventually that will turn up. Another good post. Thanks for sharing. Hopefully, Paige won't get into any more trouble before the boys return.
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Paige got out, but I wonder if Bradley will be able to help Cash and his buddy. She never did find the treasure everyone was talking about, but I guess eventually that will turn up. Another good post. Thanks for sharing. Hopefully, Paige won't get into any more trouble before the boys return.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, a good chapter. Love Bradley. He seems like a nice friendly ghost. At least Paige is now out of all those tunnels. Gosh is the house not about to collapse with all the goings on. Well penned. luv jada
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Hi Barbie, a good chapter. Love Bradley. He seems like a nice friendly ghost. At least Paige is now out of all those tunnels. Gosh is the house not about to collapse with all the goings on. Well penned. luv jada
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from padumachitta
Hey. i am not at all worried about the length...it is good and it desrves to be long, I like long books...I hate it when it is over and the characters who have become my friends, are gone...just keep writng ok,...and then the next and the next ...ok.
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Hey. i am not at all worried about the length...it is good and it desrves to be long, I like long books...I hate it when it is over and the characters who have become my friends, are gone...just keep writng ok,...and then the next and the next ...ok.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
So the ghost of Bradley Bookman still roams the tunnels of the underground railroad and now he has led Paige back to safety. He told Paige that he still had work to do and then the tunnel finally caved.
I hope the ghosts work includes saving Bash and the others. Maybe then Cash will believe.
Enough entertaining dialog for more love and Irish Hugs.
Roger
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Hi Barbara:)
So the ghost of Bradley Bookman still roams the tunnels of the underground railroad and now he has led Paige back to safety. He told Paige that he still had work to do and then the tunnel finally caved.
I hope the ghosts work includes saving Bash and the others. Maybe then Cash will believe.
Enough entertaining dialog for more love and Irish Hugs.
Roger
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Those tunnels must be pretty lethal and probably more of them than a badger sett! Seems like the guys may have to dig their way out - straight up through the roof is good at times like this!
Patrick
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Hi Barbara,
Those tunnels must be pretty lethal and probably more of them than a badger sett! Seems like the guys may have to dig their way out - straight up through the roof is good at times like this!
Patrick
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I am not an expert on tunnels. I have been in a few and have researched, but....
Comment from smudge
An exciting time for page in the tunnel. The helpful ghost's words is highlighted on bold. I think it should be treated as normal dialogue or otherwise in italics.
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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An exciting time for page in the tunnel. The helpful ghost's words is highlighted on bold. I think it should be treated as normal dialogue or otherwise in italics.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. I am never sure how to write ghost's dialogue.
