Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 159 "When Sunshine Finally Comes"Photograph Inspired Poems
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Comment from Green Lake Girl
I love the photo choice for this poem. Adios winter and hello Spring! It's been quite gray in Michigan. Looking forward to lots more sunshine. Nicely penned poem!
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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I love the photo choice for this poem. Adios winter and hello Spring! It's been quite gray in Michigan. Looking forward to lots more sunshine. Nicely penned poem!
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Thank you Marietta. I heartily agree.
Comment from RGstar
And when Spring arrives, Treischel, we will be pining for summer, or hope for that smooth transition so it is hardly noticeable.
Good write, my friend,
RG
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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And when Spring arrives, Treischel, we will be pining for summer, or hope for that smooth transition so it is hardly noticeable.
Good write, my friend,
RG
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you RG.
Comment from rod007
Spring is not only for 'returning birds' but also for our returning spirit. I liked these lines:
"The trees bud
into leaves
for the returning
birds"
Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Spring is not only for 'returning birds' but also for our returning spirit. I liked these lines:
"The trees bud
into leaves
for the returning
birds"
Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you rod. Yes, it is uplifting.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
It has been a long time coming for the northern hemisphere.
Every word sings the praises of the summer seasonand I truly
understand why.
Nkw it's our turn in the south as autumn winds turn cold and chilly
And winter is nearby.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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It has been a long time coming for the northern hemisphere.
Every word sings the praises of the summer seasonand I truly
understand why.
Nkw it's our turn in the south as autumn winds turn cold and chilly
And winter is nearby.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Yes, indeed Shirley, but first you have a marvelous season ahead, the fall.
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treischel,
A lovely poem about your welcome of Spring, and a perfect photo to go with it.
Aloha
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Aloha Treischel,
A lovely poem about your welcome of Spring, and a perfect photo to go with it.
Aloha
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you Ginger. You live were it is forever spring.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
"When Sunshine Finally Comes" is excellent free verse poetry celebrating the return of spring and the warmth of it sunshine. It has great unconventional visually pleasing structure. It has good figurative language and imagery (drab turns to green). It has some internal rhyme. It flows well.
Preston
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Hi, Treischel,
"When Sunshine Finally Comes" is excellent free verse poetry celebrating the return of spring and the warmth of it sunshine. It has great unconventional visually pleasing structure. It has good figurative language and imagery (drab turns to green). It has some internal rhyme. It flows well.
Preston
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you Preston for an excellent review.
Comment from words
Love your vivid description of the joys of spring.
It does sound like you had a very trying winter.
Haven't lived in the land of snow for many years, it seems that I have forgotten how gloomy winter can be.
Great reminder.
Glad the sun has finally come.
Hugs,d
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Love your vivid description of the joys of spring.
It does sound like you had a very trying winter.
Haven't lived in the land of snow for many years, it seems that I have forgotten how gloomy winter can be.
Great reminder.
Glad the sun has finally come.
Hugs,d
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Thank you D. Yes, finally.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Thank you fora warm write with sunshine to boot!
This years Winter was to long and Sprng took forever to come. Nice to see and feel the warmer weather coming. Great picture and write!
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Thank you fora warm write with sunshine to boot!
This years Winter was to long and Sprng took forever to come. Nice to see and feel the warmer weather coming. Great picture and write!
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Thank you Angel. I sure is!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yes, Spring is finally here. It is warm and the flowers are blooming. That is in the UK, so it is nice to know you have it too, Tom. There is nothing nicer than the sun to brighten up our lives. Lovely poem and lovely photo. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Yes, Spring is finally here. It is warm and the flowers are blooming. That is in the UK, so it is nice to know you have it too, Tom. There is nothing nicer than the sun to brighten up our lives. Lovely poem and lovely photo. :) Sandra
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Thank you Sandra. Yes. The sun seems so cheerful now
Comment from Kingsland
You have written a poem that I totally agree with. It is finally springtime at last. This was written in a very good form and format I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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You have written a poem that I totally agree with. It is finally springtime at last. This was written in a very good form and format I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Thank you John. Just how i felt as I saw the sun shining this morning, the temperatures finally rising out of the 40s into the 50s.
