Sins of My Father
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Event Worth Mentioning"A coming of age story.
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Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
I think this chapter explains the struggle of Rory French more than before.
It seems he wants to understand the behavior of his dad, even justifying the nglect, the "sins of his father," and attribute the lack of empathy and compassion to the earlier stroke.
Not all is disclosed about Kathleen, but apparently she is the first wiffe. She seems to have even less love and concern for Rory--or have I got that wrong?
Emotion is deep and well expressed.
Don
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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I think this chapter explains the struggle of Rory French more than before.
It seems he wants to understand the behavior of his dad, even justifying the nglect, the "sins of his father," and attribute the lack of empathy and compassion to the earlier stroke.
Not all is disclosed about Kathleen, but apparently she is the first wiffe. She seems to have even less love and concern for Rory--or have I got that wrong?
Emotion is deep and well expressed.
Don
Comment Written 08-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Kathleen was never married to Dean, Rory's father. He was drunk at the time of conception. The plans were to give Rory up for adoption, but Dean panicked and couldn't do it. Kathleen is mentally challenged and doesn't have the capacity for feeling anything for Rory. She is obsessed with his father though. All of these characters were in The 'Shine Baby, a previous novel on Fanstory. I know it is confusing, but thank you so much for taking the time to find out about them. I appreciate the review. Rory is trying to figure out who he is, through his own family's history. Gretchen
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Thanks, Gretchen, for elaborating on Kathleen, Dean and Rory.
Don
Comment from jjstar
Wow! A very impressive write! I've been off the site for quite a few months, but I'm glad I got to drop in and read this. You have a gift for reading the inner workings of an adolescent's mind. So many times a parent will take for granted that their teens just either know how to deal with something or will figure out a way,that they neglect to adequately sympathize or work through it...great job!
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Wow! A very impressive write! I've been off the site for quite a few months, but I'm glad I got to drop in and read this. You have a gift for reading the inner workings of an adolescent's mind. So many times a parent will take for granted that their teens just either know how to deal with something or will figure out a way,that they neglect to adequately sympathize or work through it...great job!
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review and the wonderful comments. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Came here in a suggestion from Norbanus Looks like I am gonna enjoy reading your stuff. Another friend to work with in here. I don't have time as it is but I can't help it. Always happy to find some more good reading. Get back later ok.Just one spag ok.
suggestion.... re(-)learn
Hi here I am where I first met you. Didn't you like my "re-learn" suggestion? still as it was.
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Came here in a suggestion from Norbanus Looks like I am gonna enjoy reading your stuff. Another friend to work with in here. I don't have time as it is but I can't help it. Always happy to find some more good reading. Get back later ok.Just one spag ok.
suggestion.... re(-)learn
Hi here I am where I first met you. Didn't you like my "re-learn" suggestion? still as it was.
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you for the wonderful comments and the nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Muffins
This story keeps you interested more and more with each chapter. The father is not The villain and needs to be more open and helpful with his son, you show through The gentle telling from other people that The dad might not be mentally capable of such a thing. From your expertly written chapter I feel The father knows This and is ashamed and doesn't know what to do. His best defense is to tell his son to "deal with it and hope for The best.
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This story keeps you interested more and more with each chapter. The father is not The villain and needs to be more open and helpful with his son, you show through The gentle telling from other people that The dad might not be mentally capable of such a thing. From your expertly written chapter I feel The father knows This and is ashamed and doesn't know what to do. His best defense is to tell his son to "deal with it and hope for The best.
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the nice comments. I really appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
A well written chapter of what I'm sure is an enjoyable book. I wish I'd been around from the beginning. Thanks for the read, and great job. :-)
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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A well written chapter of what I'm sure is an enjoyable book. I wish I'd been around from the beginning. Thanks for the read, and great job. :-)
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you very much. Gretchen
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Just popped in because of Fred's link and thoroughly enjoyed this bit of the larger story. "Just deal with it"... probably good advice, in fact. It's how you learn to make your own decisions... to be independent. Make your own mistake and you won't forget the lesson. :)
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Just popped in because of Fred's link and thoroughly enjoyed this bit of the larger story. "Just deal with it"... probably good advice, in fact. It's how you learn to make your own decisions... to be independent. Make your own mistake and you won't forget the lesson. :)
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 08-May-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the nice comments I really appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from adewpearl
You do a great job of depicting Rory's sarcastic attitude, so realistic for a teenager
When he turns to leave, I watch - add comma
You depict his frustrations with the situations of his life well Brooke
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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You do a great job of depicting Rory's sarcastic attitude, so realistic for a teenager
When he turns to leave, I watch - add comma
You depict his frustrations with the situations of his life well Brooke
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and the nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from padumachitta
Hello Gert. aAnother good chapter. i can remember this feeling...my early teenage times were filled with the terro of what ma mom would do..I hid a lot, played sports and just stayed angry...at least Rory isn't angry and lashing out...
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Hello Gert. aAnother good chapter. i can remember this feeling...my early teenage times were filled with the terro of what ma mom would do..I hid a lot, played sports and just stayed angry...at least Rory isn't angry and lashing out...
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from Misrael
I feel so sorry for Rory JR and I hope that hope that things work out for the best for them. I have been enjoying every post and look forward to each one. Good read and keep up the good work.
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I feel so sorry for Rory JR and I hope that hope that things work out for the best for them. I have been enjoying every post and look forward to each one. Good read and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello Gretchen,
As always, I'm amazed at how convincingly you get into an adolescent male's head.
A good read. I feel for the boy!
Hope you're having a great weekend.
xxx
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Hello Gretchen,
As always, I'm amazed at how convincingly you get into an adolescent male's head.
A good read. I feel for the boy!
Hope you're having a great weekend.
xxx
Sonali :)
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the nice comments. Gretchen
