An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Movin' On"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
21 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Movin on, that's a beautiful story going way back to your childhood. I enjoyed reading it, Good luck at the contest.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Movin on, that's a beautiful story going way back to your childhood. I enjoyed reading it, Good luck at the contest.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thanks so very much, Hugs back to you, :-) Carolyn
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your welcome. Hugs!lakeport./
Comment from adewpearl
nineth in a family of ten - ninth
you have an engaging narrative style throughout
my Fanstorian friends, - add comma
what a thoughtful way to express your appreciation for the encouragement you have received :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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nineth in a family of ten - ninth
you have an engaging narrative style throughout
my Fanstorian friends, - add comma
what a thoughtful way to express your appreciation for the encouragement you have received :-) Brooke
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thanks Brooke, I so appreciate your continued thoroughness and encouragement. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Sanku
true .Together we have celebrated poetry and worshipped on the portals of Muse. Though my contribution is very little,(just one poem about the master craftsman Shakespeare) I am happy that i could follow your marathon effort.
I liked what you wrote about your family .especially about the first TV!Black and white ,wood cabinet! It took me back to my first Tv ,the same!Love , Santha.
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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true .Together we have celebrated poetry and worshipped on the portals of Muse. Though my contribution is very little,(just one poem about the master craftsman Shakespeare) I am happy that i could follow your marathon effort.
I liked what you wrote about your family .especially about the first TV!Black and white ,wood cabinet! It took me back to my first Tv ,the same!Love , Santha.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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We share similarities, smile, I am overwhelmed that you have even commented on this one. You are a dear friend. I am trying now to decide what to write. I would love to read some more of your work. Then I can pay you back with good reviews. LOL
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a very interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. I remember I was about fourteen when we got our first TV as well. We had an old radio in the corner for years before that. I remember my classmates talking about tv shows and asking me if I saw them. I just lief and said that I was watching the other channel. I was too ashamed to say that we didn't have a tv.
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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This is a very interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. I remember I was about fourteen when we got our first TV as well. We had an old radio in the corner for years before that. I remember my classmates talking about tv shows and asking me if I saw them. I just lief and said that I was watching the other channel. I was too ashamed to say that we didn't have a tv.
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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I will never forget that day either. Dad saved for 'ages' to buy it. It definitely opened doors to entertainment, news, etc. We did not go to movies much, town was to far away, (and lack of money of course.) Thank you so much Tom, for your comments.
:-) Carolyn
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It was a pleasure
Comment from GracieAnn
Carolyn, this Non-Fiction Writing Contest entry is timed well for the contest and serves as an inspiration to all who participated in the month-long endeavor. What fun. I haven't counted how many I did nor their designation since I frequently did 2 a day. A great effort for all. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Carolyn, this Non-Fiction Writing Contest entry is timed well for the contest and serves as an inspiration to all who participated in the month-long endeavor. What fun. I haven't counted how many I did nor their designation since I frequently did 2 a day. A great effort for all. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 03-May-2014
reply by the author on 03-May-2014
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Yes it was, and I enjoyed each one of yours equally. Congratulations on your accomplishments. It was a long, but fulfilling month. Thanks for this great review and generous rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
A well-written short bio of you along with a show of gratitude to your supporters. Got a kick out of your multi-tasking. I read during the TV commercials.
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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A well-written short bio of you along with a show of gratitude to your supporters. Got a kick out of your multi-tasking. I read during the TV commercials.
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Thanks Shari,
When you are from a big family or any situation which creates busyness, you have to multi-task. I can imagine you are doing a lot of that with Frank's illness to deal with. I think of you, a lot.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
I ALWAYS TOLD MY GRANDKIDS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING TO KEEP BUSY GET A BOOK ANY BOOK YOU WOULD LIKE TO READ AND DO SO. IT TO HAS KEPT THEM OUT OF TROUBLE AND HIGHER GRADES ALL THROUGHT OUT SCHOOL.
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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I ALWAYS TOLD MY GRANDKIDS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING TO KEEP BUSY GET A BOOK ANY BOOK YOU WOULD LIKE TO READ AND DO SO. IT TO HAS KEPT THEM OUT OF TROUBLE AND HIGHER GRADES ALL THROUGHT OUT SCHOOL.
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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That is so good to hear. Reading is one of the most important things a child or anyone, for that matter can do. It opens doors of understanding that is incredible. My favorite all time book is the Bible. :-) Carolyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Yes, "God Bless us, everyone".
It was fun to take the journey with you Caroline (even if I wasn't along every step of the way, I certainly enjoyed the parts that I was able to participate in).
Connie
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Yes, "God Bless us, everyone".
It was fun to take the journey with you Caroline (even if I wasn't along every step of the way, I certainly enjoyed the parts that I was able to participate in).
Connie
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Thanks Connie and I appreciated each review you gave. It was definitely a 'we' project. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Very pretty picture, Carolyn. It reminds me of AZ, but not sure if that is the state. You did great. I only have one that has reached all time best. I have quite a few that have been recognized. Great. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Very pretty picture, Carolyn. It reminds me of AZ, but not sure if that is the state. You did great. I only have one that has reached all time best. I have quite a few that have been recognized. Great. Miss Sally
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Being recognized is great Miss Sally. I love your work. That pic is probably from AZ. See you soon, Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
Hi Carolyn ,LOL...I loved Tarzan...and yes Johnny Weismuller...have every one of his shows...LOL...it was a fun journey...I am so glad you got some awards...you earned them..you were from ten kids...I was from six...hated when it was my turn to do dishes...LOL...I love your little story...so very sweet and very well written...love it!!!!! Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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Hi Carolyn ,LOL...I loved Tarzan...and yes Johnny Weismuller...have every one of his shows...LOL...it was a fun journey...I am so glad you got some awards...you earned them..you were from ten kids...I was from six...hated when it was my turn to do dishes...LOL...I love your little story...so very sweet and very well written...love it!!!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 02-May-2014
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He was my favorite. And the scenes could sometimes literally terrorize me. I could just imagine being Jane an swingin' through the trees. Or scrambling only one(1) egg for his breakfast. An ostrich egg.....LOL.. So glad you enjoyed Movin' On. Luff you back, Carolyn
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LOL Carolyn, I love those parts...her getting water from the mill wheel...LOL...and if Jane or boy were in trouble all they had to do was yell...LOL...those were the days...did you ever watch Fury....black horse...my all time favorite...every Saturday morning...LOL...Luff
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Did I watch Fury, are you kidding, we had a Shetland pony, not as tall as a yearling calf. And we named him Fury. In our imagination he was 16 hands high. You know, you and I should bio-write more of this stuff. Luff and goodnight. Carolyn
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goodnight...tomorrow...sweet dreams...luff
