An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Sail me away"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
21 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
That was a very soulful song. Asking Him to help one form a peaceful and meaningful existence and a safe passage.Once we reach Him we will no more be weary .I liked this very poem very much especially the first stanza.
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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That was a very soulful song. Asking Him to help one form a peaceful and meaningful existence and a safe passage.Once we reach Him we will no more be weary .I liked this very poem very much especially the first stanza.
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Thank you once again for following this series so faithfully. I appreciate that you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Carolyn - I am having a giggle to myself - it seems I am going in the opposite direction so reversing your count down....trying to catch up while still packing up a house is a tough one.:)
Great post, and well penned with your overall work bringing a calm to me as well.
Thanks for sharing it.
maureen
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Dear Carolyn - I am having a giggle to myself - it seems I am going in the opposite direction so reversing your count down....trying to catch up while still packing up a house is a tough one.:)
Great post, and well penned with your overall work bringing a calm to me as well.
Thanks for sharing it.
maureen
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Bless your heart, I don't know how you are doing it all. How is your energy holding out.
Thank you for following this series. I don't care if you read them from every direction. LOL Your comments always mean so much to me. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Benny Beeharry
What a tender, nostalgic, beautiful and creative piece of writing.
I did tell you once that you are are very good at creative writing.
It is bound to come to bloom.
This is a most beautiful writing. I want to give you a six for it.but you will be more attracted to the six than the depth of this writing.
So i keep the six for another one, not to spoil this one
Benny
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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What a tender, nostalgic, beautiful and creative piece of writing.
I did tell you once that you are are very good at creative writing.
It is bound to come to bloom.
This is a most beautiful writing. I want to give you a six for it.but you will be more attracted to the six than the depth of this writing.
So i keep the six for another one, not to spoil this one
Benny
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Good morning Benny, I enjoyed reading this sweet review of 'Sail me away.' Thank you for your kind comments. The best part is that you enjoyed the poem. ( When I grow up, I want to write like you.) I posted the last poem last night. I hope you will like Day 30 as well. Love, Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
What a nice tribute to your father -in-law. I am sure he would love it. print it, frame it, and treasure it forever. I did this with a friend who passed away and have a couple of poems for my husband. Actually, I have more than that and wish I could get them published in a book. LOL. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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What a nice tribute to your father -in-law. I am sure he would love it. print it, frame it, and treasure it forever. I did this with a friend who passed away and have a couple of poems for my husband. Actually, I have more than that and wish I could get them published in a book. LOL. Miss Sally
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I hope we can all get published someday myself. LOL I love your work Miss Sally. Thanks for the kind review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from AprilShower
I like this poem, Carolyn. This is all we can hope for at the end of our journey.
I enjoyed reading this poem. There's only one more poem coming for this month. You have done well.
I'm looking forward to warmer and calmer weather. Aren't you?
April
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I like this poem, Carolyn. This is all we can hope for at the end of our journey.
I enjoyed reading this poem. There's only one more poem coming for this month. You have done well.
I'm looking forward to warmer and calmer weather. Aren't you?
April
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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April, you have honored me and my work. Thank you so much for the kind review and awesome stars. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn, a very inspirational and stimulating spiritual poem.
I enjoyed reading it very much because I could feel the freedom along with serenity and bliss. In this foreign land use on your friends that greeted you and set your soul free from discernible loneliness. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for others made the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Carolyn, a very inspirational and stimulating spiritual poem.
I enjoyed reading it very much because I could feel the freedom along with serenity and bliss. In this foreign land use on your friends that greeted you and set your soul free from discernible loneliness. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for others made the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thank you Alex for the wonderful comments. I'm glad you like,
Sail me away. Thanks also for this generous rating. :-) Carolyn
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You are so sincerely welcome Carolyn
Comment from emrpoems
this sounds very much like a prayer and maybe well be made into a song.
Great sense of peace is found in these lines.
thank you for sharing all your lovely poem and good luck with the collection
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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this sounds very much like a prayer and maybe well be made into a song.
Great sense of peace is found in these lines.
thank you for sharing all your lovely poem and good luck with the collection
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for this fine review and well wishes. Only two to go. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
The words and artwork form a perfect combination. Good rhyme used. Your work is very poetic, yet easy to read and understand. Very nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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The words and artwork form a perfect combination. Good rhyme used. Your work is very poetic, yet easy to read and understand. Very nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Sarah, thanks so much for this great review. Glad you enjoyed it and found it easy to understand. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Just2Write
This is such a comforting write, Carolyn. Good for you for sticking to your plan of writing for NaPoMo. I did that a few years ago. A poem a day - it was a wonderful journey, and I discovered many new forms in my desire to change things up through the month.
I'll bet you have too. I'm coming to this party rather late, but I must say, if this poem is an example, you've done very, very well.
Rose.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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This is such a comforting write, Carolyn. Good for you for sticking to your plan of writing for NaPoMo. I did that a few years ago. A poem a day - it was a wonderful journey, and I discovered many new forms in my desire to change things up through the month.
I'll bet you have too. I'm coming to this party rather late, but I must say, if this poem is an example, you've done very, very well.
Rose.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Hi there and thanks so much Rose, for reading and enjoying 'Sail me away.' I would love it if you read the others. You said it right, it is quite a journey. ;-) Carolyn
Comment from l.raven
Hi Carolyn, what a great poem...I often think about when people talk about footprints in the sand...my brothers ashes were put in the water in Florida...he lived most of his life there...and I think how close he is to the shore to walk with God now...such a beautiful poem...and the perfect picture...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Hi Carolyn, what a great poem...I often think about when people talk about footprints in the sand...my brothers ashes were put in the water in Florida...he lived most of his life there...and I think how close he is to the shore to walk with God now...such a beautiful poem...and the perfect picture...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Hi there, So glad you liked this one. When I go back and read my own work, I sometimes think I must have written it just for me. I need those very words at times. Have a good evening my friend. :-) Carolyn
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Hi Carulyn, went out for awhile...just got back...you have a great night too!!! Luff
