Finding Love
Love Poem Poetry Contest Submission35 total reviews
Comment from vapros
This is a fine romantic poem, well planned and neatly presented. You have related your journey through doubt and into love. Someone will be glad to see this. I found it very entertaining.
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This is a fine romantic poem, well planned and neatly presented. You have related your journey through doubt and into love. Someone will be glad to see this. I found it very entertaining.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with dawn/lawn. Good description and alliteration. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with dawn/lawn. Good description and alliteration. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
Comment from angelface2
This is certainly a very nice love poem, Idamarty. I enjoyed reading it immensely. Everyone needs to find a love for themselves. Miss Sally
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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This is certainly a very nice love poem, Idamarty. I enjoyed reading it immensely. Everyone needs to find a love for themselves. Miss Sally
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from judy.gordon
The beautiful simplistic words that you used to create a lovely message that brought me back to my first love. I could feel the struggle that you were having in your soul before you let love consume you. I liked what you saw, felt, and heard that finally broke the chains and set you free to accept love and return it.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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The beautiful simplistic words that you used to create a lovely message that brought me back to my first love. I could feel the struggle that you were having in your soul before you let love consume you. I liked what you saw, felt, and heard that finally broke the chains and set you free to accept love and return it.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and for the six stars...I truly appreciate them and I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from kiwijenny
I was blind, but love was not
Whispered my name and I was caught
It wrapped itself around my heart
And though I asked, would not depart
Yes love hits us like a ton of bricks or at least it did for me
God bless
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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I was blind, but love was not
Whispered my name and I was caught
It wrapped itself around my heart
And though I asked, would not depart
Yes love hits us like a ton of bricks or at least it did for me
God bless
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
