Butterfly
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Comment from krys123
Teresa, I found it amazing that I'm reading your poem today as of yesterday I save the butterfly he was bouncing against my window trying to get out. I set him free as free as your poem.
Your poem emphasizes this freedom, this floating freedom Which
soars like the butterflies themselves. Your picture was very creative in complement your poem very much your poem was very inventive and you resourceful In writing such a magnificent piece. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Teresa, I found it amazing that I'm reading your poem today as of yesterday I save the butterfly he was bouncing against my window trying to get out. I set him free as free as your poem.
Your poem emphasizes this freedom, this floating freedom Which
soars like the butterflies themselves. Your picture was very creative in complement your poem very much your poem was very inventive and you resourceful In writing such a magnificent piece. Thank you so much for sharing and posting this work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Alex for the wonderful and beautiful review. I'm glad you set the butterfly free:)
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You are so sincerely welcomed Teresa
Comment from MommaT
Loved this so much. To show that you can listen with out sound is awesome and your choice or imagery was great for this intent as well. If people would see that we have natural beauty around us maybe there would not be so much sadness in the world. Thank you.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Loved this so much. To show that you can listen with out sound is awesome and your choice or imagery was great for this intent as well. If people would see that we have natural beauty around us maybe there would not be so much sadness in the world. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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sitting and listening in silence to nature is one of my favorite things to do. I'm glad you found this enjoyable. Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from Dom G Robles
To be a butterfly, the writer feels, is blissful. The butterfly with all its different colors flies effortless
and kisses flowers as they bloom....
The butterflies whisper words of wisdom. They busy themselves with work of love ...kisses of peace as they flutter by.
The picture of two butterflies with other smaller ones, bring into focus what the poem is saying. Dom.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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To be a butterfly, the writer feels, is blissful. The butterfly with all its different colors flies effortless
and kisses flowers as they bloom....
The butterflies whisper words of wisdom. They busy themselves with work of love ...kisses of peace as they flutter by.
The picture of two butterflies with other smaller ones, bring into focus what the poem is saying. Dom.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dom:)
Comment from Willowsong
A truly delicate and inviting depiction of the life of a butterfly. Such a simple and sublime existence to share. A wonderful ode to the butterfly with beautiful imagery and a lovely gif to compliment.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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A truly delicate and inviting depiction of the life of a butterfly. Such a simple and sublime existence to share. A wonderful ode to the butterfly with beautiful imagery and a lovely gif to compliment.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review:)
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You're most welcome...cheers! :-)
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
This is a beautifully written poem. I love the picture you used to go with your wonderful work. I liked watching them flutter and fly by as I read your poem.
Kat
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Hi Teresa,
This is a beautifully written poem. I love the picture you used to go with your wonderful work. I liked watching them flutter and fly by as I read your poem.
Kat
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Kat for the wonderful review. I love watching the butterflies too:)
Comment from JavaJunkie
This is a nice ode to the butterfly. They are so beautifully delicate and peaceful that we are drawn to them. They have always been a wonder to me, and I think you have captured some of their wonder here in this poem. There is something about beauty that draws us in, nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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This is a nice ode to the butterfly. They are so beautifully delicate and peaceful that we are drawn to them. They have always been a wonder to me, and I think you have captured some of their wonder here in this poem. There is something about beauty that draws us in, nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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I'm drawn to butterflies too and they remind me of my Dad who died 15 years ago. Thanks for the lovely review:)
Comment from GWinterwin
Very pretty thoughts in this poem. Yes to be a butter fly, floating in the air with hardly no effort at all. Good word flow and rhyming, as you tell of the pretty butter fly.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Very pretty thoughts in this poem. Yes to be a butter fly, floating in the air with hardly no effort at all. Good word flow and rhyming, as you tell of the pretty butter fly.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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thank you for the lovely review:)
Comment from adewpearl
Gorgeous presentation of your poem
excellent consonance in free flying butterfly
and alliteration in singing their silent song
vivid, lovely descriptive detail
good alliteration in whisper words of wisdom
I also really like the final section where you characterize the peaceful, loving nature of the butterfly
what a lovely wish of the kind of life the speaker would like to live :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Gorgeous presentation of your poem
excellent consonance in free flying butterfly
and alliteration in singing their silent song
vivid, lovely descriptive detail
good alliteration in whisper words of wisdom
I also really like the final section where you characterize the peaceful, loving nature of the butterfly
what a lovely wish of the kind of life the speaker would like to live :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Brooke for the lovely and kind review:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
I've never had a butterfly whisper anything into my ear, Teresa, and if one did, I'd probably pee my pants! I do enjoy watching these busy little creatures, however, as they flutter about from flower to flower, collecting their sweet nectar.
I liked the dream-like quality and fantasy feel of this wonderfully written poem. It is beautifully presented too, with your accompanying photo
Nicely done!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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I've never had a butterfly whisper anything into my ear, Teresa, and if one did, I'd probably pee my pants! I do enjoy watching these busy little creatures, however, as they flutter about from flower to flower, collecting their sweet nectar.
I liked the dream-like quality and fantasy feel of this wonderfully written poem. It is beautifully presented too, with your accompanying photo
Nicely done!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Hey thanks Dean for the awesome picture:) You have to listen to the butterfly's silent whisper. It's like God speaking - it's just there:) Have a happy day.
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How do you make a picture animated like that and can I steal your picture to use with the poem? Also congrats on the horror prompt win - I knew it was you:)
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You're very welcome, Teresa, it's always my pleasure.
Yes, sure you can use it if you'd like. Just click on the animation, and it will take you to where I have it saved. On the right is a menu, inside that menu are four codes. Click the HTML code to copy it, then paste it at the top of your post. The animation will appear, it's as simple as that.
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thanks.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
There is something very peaceful about this poem. Free verse longing for the life of a butterfly - 'blowing kisses of peace as they flutter by you and I' - Lovely use of metaphor in this poem. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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There is something very peaceful about this poem. Free verse longing for the life of a butterfly - 'blowing kisses of peace as they flutter by you and I' - Lovely use of metaphor in this poem. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dorothy for the lovely review:)
