Butterfly
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Comment from Smoothiecool
your images allow the reader to see and feel the life of the butterfly as it floats in the air breathing words of wisdom to those that are prepared to listen
great enjambment to allow free flow of your verses
good use of assonance
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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your images allow the reader to see and feel the life of the butterfly as it floats in the air breathing words of wisdom to those that are prepared to listen
great enjambment to allow free flow of your verses
good use of assonance
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks SC for the awesome review:)
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most welcome..SC
Comment from Charlene0513
To TAB_that'sme,
You have captured the essence of such beautiful creatures and the love of nature.
whisper words - a combination of alliteration and metaphor
of wisdom
kisses of peace - nice metaphor
Charlene
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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To TAB_that'sme,
You have captured the essence of such beautiful creatures and the love of nature.
whisper words - a combination of alliteration and metaphor
of wisdom
kisses of peace - nice metaphor
Charlene
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Charlene for the lovely review:)
Comment from amahra
I loved that you said, "paper wings" and not paper-thin wings, which is what they are. I loved the art work and can never figure out how to paste them and have them still move.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I loved that you said, "paper wings" and not paper-thin wings, which is what they are. I loved the art work and can never figure out how to paste them and have them still move.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the lovely review. As for the animated picture, Dean Kuch had sent it to me in his review and I asked to use it and how to. It was through a photobucket.com site and copying the html code and putting it directly into the body of the poem (above) instead of as a picture.
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Thank you so much. I'll remember that.
Comment from Cedar
This is a fun poem to read. When we let our imaginations run wild, it's amazing what we dream about. I really like your presentation picture. Great job. Bill
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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This is a fun poem to read. When we let our imaginations run wild, it's amazing what we dream about. I really like your presentation picture. Great job. Bill
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Bill for the great review:)
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very calming piece of poetry. I loved the style and thee free floating feel to this. Great imagery with the butterfly kissing the blooms. Nice work on this.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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This was a very calming piece of poetry. I loved the style and thee free floating feel to this. Great imagery with the butterfly kissing the blooms. Nice work on this.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much:)
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
It is so easy to be drawn to the beauty and freedom of the butterfly so
Vibrant and colourful.
Your poetry has a vibrant and gentle tone and conveys a wistful sense
Of delight in the butterflies flight.
I like the idea of the butterflies spreading a message of peace because the world can surely use much more of that.
Wwell written and presented with a lovely image.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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It is so easy to be drawn to the beauty and freedom of the butterfly so
Vibrant and colourful.
Your poetry has a vibrant and gentle tone and conveys a wistful sense
Of delight in the butterflies flight.
I like the idea of the butterflies spreading a message of peace because the world can surely use much more of that.
Wwell written and presented with a lovely image.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you for lovely review:)
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Nice coloring and artwork used for this poem. Good alliterations used. Beautiful image of the butterfly sketched.
Very well done.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Nice coloring and artwork used for this poem. Good alliterations used. Beautiful image of the butterfly sketched.
Very well done.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Sarah, thank you for the lovely review and the wonderful gift of the six stars:)
Comment from shwetacj
Brilliant!!!
Nature is amazing creation by God..Every constituent of nature spreads some message to all of us to make our life worthwhile. Trees teach us to give whatever we have without checking to whom we should give. Giving should be selfless and we must not expect anything in return. Roses teach us to smile in any condition and never to lose hope. They spread the message of love. Likewise the poet has nicely narrated what these wise creatures want to do. They are playing very important role in pollination, but so nicely explained in the poem.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Brilliant!!!
Nature is amazing creation by God..Every constituent of nature spreads some message to all of us to make our life worthwhile. Trees teach us to give whatever we have without checking to whom we should give. Giving should be selfless and we must not expect anything in return. Roses teach us to smile in any condition and never to lose hope. They spread the message of love. Likewise the poet has nicely narrated what these wise creatures want to do. They are playing very important role in pollination, but so nicely explained in the poem.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind and lovely review:)
Comment from mfowler
What a sweet poem! The butterfly's beauty and apparent ease of lifestyle always captures human hearts. Although their life is short, they adorn nature with grace and peaceful particpation in the theatre of life. Your excellent free verse captures the spontaneity, and apparent freedom of a butterfly's life. This was my favourite moment in the poem:singing their silent song
beneath paper wings
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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What a sweet poem! The butterfly's beauty and apparent ease of lifestyle always captures human hearts. Although their life is short, they adorn nature with grace and peaceful particpation in the theatre of life. Your excellent free verse captures the spontaneity, and apparent freedom of a butterfly's life. This was my favourite moment in the poem:singing their silent song
beneath paper wings
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review:)
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
This is a sweet, light and picturesque piece you have written. The presentation is awesome.
Oh to float blissfully and whisper words of wisdom
and who doesn't like butterflies?
Nicely done, Carolyn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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This is a sweet, light and picturesque piece you have written. The presentation is awesome.
Oh to float blissfully and whisper words of wisdom
and who doesn't like butterflies?
Nicely done, Carolyn
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Carolyn for the lovely review:)
