Butterfly
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Comment from ELumpkins
Very good spring time piece.One can see all the beautiful butterflys come out with the early blooming plants.They dart from one to another as if they klnow the pretty bloom will soon fade away. The poem not only is gbreat, it is presented by a very nice piece of animated art. Great work
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Very good spring time piece.One can see all the beautiful butterflys come out with the early blooming plants.They dart from one to another as if they klnow the pretty bloom will soon fade away. The poem not only is gbreat, it is presented by a very nice piece of animated art. Great work
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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If it is great can I ask why the 4 stars then?
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I am sorry ) must have hit the wrong key when I rated this sorry, I will edit and makit a five.
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I am sorry ) must have hit the wrong key when I rated this sorry, I will edit and makit a five.
Comment from Leineco
You make me wish I could grow wings! How full of life and merriment these butterflies feel! (and secret wisdom too!) What a wonderfully spring evoking poem :-)
Nice write.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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You make me wish I could grow wings! How full of life and merriment these butterflies feel! (and secret wisdom too!) What a wonderfully spring evoking poem :-)
Nice write.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks Leineco for the lovely review:)
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Tab,
I appreciate your wish in this sensitive write. Wouldn't it be wonderful if life was about only what was important, and was not bogged down with the unnecessary. Sometimes people's perception of what they think it takes to make a full life is amazing! It's the simple things that satisfy, and most of those are free...like sunshine, fresh air (if you live in the right area, lol), and lets not forget a smile and a chance to help someone. All free! Nice job with this one...best wishes, Bill
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Hi Tab,
I appreciate your wish in this sensitive write. Wouldn't it be wonderful if life was about only what was important, and was not bogged down with the unnecessary. Sometimes people's perception of what they think it takes to make a full life is amazing! It's the simple things that satisfy, and most of those are free...like sunshine, fresh air (if you live in the right area, lol), and lets not forget a smile and a chance to help someone. All free! Nice job with this one...best wishes, Bill
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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You are right Bill, we need to appreciate those things in life more. Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from L.A.Matthies
Such a dainty, majestic creature. Yet, we are all butterflies in our own way. Beautiful words and a lovely presentation too :)Linda
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Such a dainty, majestic creature. Yet, we are all butterflies in our own way. Beautiful words and a lovely presentation too :)Linda
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Linda for the lovely reivew
Comment from Karen B.
Teresa, I love your imagery, alliteration, and the ways you describe these creatures of beauty. We'd all do well to busy ourselves with works of love in silence and gentleness as they do. This was wonderful to read!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Teresa, I love your imagery, alliteration, and the ways you describe these creatures of beauty. We'd all do well to busy ourselves with works of love in silence and gentleness as they do. This was wonderful to read!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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thanks so much.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Teresa - I have loved butterflies, and you have managed to bring such soft images that I could see them fluttering around me as I read.
I enjoyed reading this one. Nicely done and full of dreams.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Dear Teresa - I have loved butterflies, and you have managed to bring such soft images that I could see them fluttering around me as I read.
I enjoyed reading this one. Nicely done and full of dreams.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks Maureen for sharing my butterfly dreams:)
Comment from Chocolate Chip
The sentiment of this poem stopped me in my tracks! I seemed to have followed the route of this butterfly just from your description. Job well done & I do hope you are able to share this piece with others because it's absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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The sentiment of this poem stopped me in my tracks! I seemed to have followed the route of this butterfly just from your description. Job well done & I do hope you are able to share this piece with others because it's absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for the awesome review:)
Comment from amada
This is a lovely and very endearing delight. Enchanted at the picture and your words...My fave "oh, to float in the air
breathlessly..." It would be wonderful.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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This is a lovely and very endearing delight. Enchanted at the picture and your words...My fave "oh, to float in the air
breathlessly..." It would be wonderful.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks amada for the lovely review:)
Comment from Rondeno
Um ... I'm a little puzzled by this one. A list of colors doesn't strike me as poetry. Butterflies don't have paper wings. They're not wise. And "flutter by" is a children's chant, isn't it?
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Um ... I'm a little puzzled by this one. A list of colors doesn't strike me as poetry. Butterflies don't have paper wings. They're not wise. And "flutter by" is a children's chant, isn't it?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thanks for your opinion on this.
Comment from GracieAnn
Teresa, this is an uplifting piece that is whimsical and inviting the imagination to come along with the butterflies you so aptly describe. The rhyme is engaging and balanced with a delightful rhyme. I enjoyed the mini vacation in the fields. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Teresa, this is an uplifting piece that is whimsical and inviting the imagination to come along with the butterflies you so aptly describe. The rhyme is engaging and balanced with a delightful rhyme. I enjoyed the mini vacation in the fields. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review:)
