Comment from Lothlorien

Excellent

I really like this poem because it makes me feel at peace. It does an excellent job of conveying the beauty of butterflys.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

I'm glad it brought you peace:) Thanks for the great review.

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Let me be your flower my lovely butterfly Together you and I
Silently in love forever You will never leave me never Have a great weekend Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks for the lovely review - lol.

reply by rouskin on 26-Apr-2014

Smile :)

Comment from expressions9

Excellent

A lovely dreamy poem Teresa! The imagery is vivid .. you take the reader on the butterfly's journey so smoothly. Good alliteration with silent/song, whisper/words, be/butterfly. The presentation and graphics complements your poem really well. Thanks for sharing :) God bless, Christine

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks Christine for the lovely review:)

reply by expressions9 on 26-Apr-2014

You're welcome :)

Comment from skye

Excellent

Your words and art blend together perfectly, making the butterflies come alive, in all their spectacular colors and glory.
Love the beauty of these fragile gifts of nature.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you for the lovely review skye:)

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

silently they busy themselves with work of love kissing, such beautiful words and a stunning poem, well done about a butterfly well done

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks for the excellent review:)

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

(6) This is such a free-falling message of hope and peace....for the butterfly lives in each of us.Your writing is so filled with positive images that I have read it many times. Thank you.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you for the excellent review:)

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Oh! If only butterflies lived long enough to spread the wisdom of peace and love around the world. That is what we need more of and more poetry like yours. Don

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you Don for the excellent review:)

Comment from Terrie DeGolier

Excellent

As I read your poem I thought ya know I have never seen a butterfly that wasn't beautiful. Their grace in flight, their gentleness, their presence is even peaceful. I loved your picture as well seeing them flutter before they kiss the flowers. Terrie

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

They sure are all beautiful. Thanks for the lovely review:)

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

This is an upbeat visualization. A whimsical image of the butterflies kissing the flowers. I'm curious about the animation. How did you manage that?

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thanks for the lovely review. As for the animation - Dean Kuch sent it to me in his review. I asked his permission to use it and he told me how to do it. It is through photobucket.com and you have to copy the html code and paste it into the body of the poem instead of using a picture.

Comment from closetpoetjester

Good

Not a bad fluttering here as you narrate the butterfly and admire it's grace and beauty, but to be honest, I think most of this sort of thing has been said before and I feel your piece came up a bit short for originality. The butterfly is a beautiful creature, but I feel he deserves a little more than this gave. Sorry, but I have to be honest for my $1.17.
With that said, I DID like them busying themselves with the flower kissing. That DID feel like a fresh injection of poetic life.
Cheers P

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

thank you for the review.