Comment from mfowler

Excellent

All the way through this, I was thinking, I know this scenario. Even the 10% diet sounded plausible. You caught me totally with that great one liner in the end about the husband not having a fat arse or head. LOL funny stuff. Well conceived and written!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thank you so much for this great review, mfowler, and is really appreciate your response to my little story. Thanks for taking the time to read and I'm pleased you enjoyed.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from JBCaine

Exceptional

Indy-
Wow, check you out! Poet, author, ghost writer. Is there something you cannot do? I think not.
Don't think I don't see you out there with your wins and near-wins in all these contests.
Good for you Kid. This one made me laugh, probably almost as much as it did your pal Ray.
Good to see you out there having some fun.
JBCaine-

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Well, this has to be the best review I've ever gotten, JB. You made me blush...and I love to blush. Thank you more than I can say for the gold star rating and your wonderful comments. You make me feel like a writer! Thanks for making me feel good.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

What a delight story. I loved it. Just got my special laugh for the day. Thanks for sharing this. One thing caught my eye.. "Well, ain't that something? comma after well. Nicely done. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Miss Sally, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and appreciate your taking the time to read and share your kind comments. Thanks so much!
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! You totally caught me off guard with that ending! Didn't see it coming. Good story. I was rooting for the guy not to have a brain tumor or something deadly. And I learned how to lose weight easily and slowly.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thank you for this great review for my little story, Phyllis. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I sure appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah ha! Old Roy was a pretty smart cookie. The next time his darling wife calls him a fat head, or lard ass, he'll have documented. 100% proof that it's not his head and backside that are the problem, but that spare tire he carries around his waist...

Funny stuff here, IndianaIrsih. Thanks for the good, uh...belly laugh, heh heh!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for reading my story, Dean, and for your great review and comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the humor.
Smiles,
Indy : )

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Apr-2014

I did, and you are welcome, I.I.

Comment from Tom Rinkes

Exceptional

Now that's the best "clean" story I've read in years. Maybe I'll get into that someday, but for now, I like to swear a little more. Great job.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

And I love it when you swear, Tom. Lol
Thank you for reading my little story and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your generous review and the gold star sure is pretty. Thanks so much, Tom.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from Carole Rosa

Excellent

Hey Indy, Cute! This is really a cute story as well as a true story. I have the same problem. I don't have any will power so I guess a 10% diet wouldn't do me any good. But, I have a similar story. My dentist once told me that my mouth was too small and offered to put it into writing, so I could give the letter to my husband.

Carole ("Big Mouth!")

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thank you for this wonderful review for my story, Carole, and your comments made me laugh. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Indiana,

I guess that is one excuse you can use when decrying what your wife calls you. Now Old Roy can give her a belly butt. (LOL)

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my little story, Winslow. I very much appreciate your humorous comments.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Great humour in this one.
Good dialogue and interaction. Love the ending where he says he will prove his wife wrong for calling him fat head and fat ass. He has all the fat aroung his tummy. Good one that I will be giving as a joke to all

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, emrpoems, for taking the time to read and review my story. I appreciate your great comments and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Good piece there, Irish. I can definitely see this giuy sitting in the doctor's office going through all of this just with your details, which you have them perfect, even down to losing the wieght.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

It's great to get a review from you, sibhus, and thank you for taking the time to read my story. I appreciate your kind comments and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Irish : )