Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Well done. Good description of Easter routine and the reminder of the real meaning is an added benefit The sonnet style is nicely written. Good job!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you so much!

Comment from Lylise

Excellent

This is a strong entry into the Sonnet Poem writing prompt. It is well written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements fulfilled in spades. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

Your love for Christ shines through with this poem of the true meaning of Easter. Your words capture the images of those things we humans tend to associate with the Easter season. Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for your kind review. It is much appreciated!

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a nice fourteen-line poem, but of course is not really a sonnet since it has no iambic pentameter. But I rated it 5 because the rules of this contest say that doesn't matter. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thank you so much!

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

I love that you have shared the true meaning of Easter, while still celebrating the childhood memories. Your rhyming is great and best I can tell, meets the contest requirements. By the way, I was munching on a Cadbury egg when I clicked on this. How weird is that, lol.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks so much, Karen. Enjoy that egg, they're great!