Alone
free verse47 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes loneliness can cause us to plummet us into a degree of despair - life's lows - yet ironically it is only by this experience that we can truly appreciate life's better moments
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Yes loneliness can cause us to plummet us into a degree of despair - life's lows - yet ironically it is only by this experience that we can truly appreciate life's better moments
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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thank you for the great review.
Comment from NicciFaye
A period of time in reflection of one's life...a life they used to have and no longer do thereby leaving them lonely and by themseleves. Many blessings in this contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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A period of time in reflection of one's life...a life they used to have and no longer do thereby leaving them lonely and by themseleves. Many blessings in this contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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thank you for the review.
Comment from kleck140
You state very well what a lot of people
face when in their later years. You state it
well and I appreciate your sharing with us.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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You state very well what a lot of people
face when in their later years. You state it
well and I appreciate your sharing with us.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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thank you for the great review.
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Thanks for your quick reply!
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good description that allow me to feel the actual loneliness within the words. Good alliteration with sit/stare/stripped...house/home...life/lived...alone/await...life/longer/live. Good eye catching photo followed by a clear message.
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Good description that allow me to feel the actual loneliness within the words. Good alliteration with sit/stare/stripped...house/home...life/lived...alone/await...life/longer/live. Good eye catching photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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thank you for the great review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very clever. I liked how the statements seemed to turn on themselves and change mid sentence. Nice imagery and the emotional heaviness was bleak and foreboding. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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This was very clever. I liked how the statements seemed to turn on themselves and change mid sentence. Nice imagery and the emotional heaviness was bleak and foreboding. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Kingsland
Loneliness is just a depressive state of mind. It can bring one down to the depths of despair. There is nothing better in this life than being surrounded by those that love and care about you. This was a well written poem that I enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Loneliness is just a depressive state of mind. It can bring one down to the depths of despair. There is nothing better in this life than being surrounded by those that love and care about you. This was a well written poem that I enjoyed reading and writing this response for... John
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from emrpoems
couldn't get lonelier than that. Sounds similar to a prisoner in solitary confinement or in death row just waiting without any hope--to die.
Good free verse with well paired picture.
Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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couldn't get lonelier than that. Sounds similar to a prisoner in solitary confinement or in death row just waiting without any hope--to die.
Good free verse with well paired picture.
Good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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thank you for the great review.
