A flower withers..
Life is but a vapour..67 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
Another blessed message my fr4iend. I pray that those who read these fine words will be challenged with their need of Our Great Saviour. (Love that hymn too by the way, "Jesus what a friend for sinners, Jesus Lover of my soul."
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Another blessed message my fr4iend. I pray that those who read these fine words will be challenged with their need of Our Great Saviour. (Love that hymn too by the way, "Jesus what a friend for sinners, Jesus Lover of my soul."
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you Geoff, for your kind, and supportive review, my friend. Blessings, Roy
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Thank you Geoff, for your kind, and supportive review, my friend. Blessings, Roy
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello, Roy,
As always, in a touching song-poem, you've made scripture vivid and relevant to today.
I love .. flower's blight.
Christ is risen, friend - hallelujah!
Have a lovely week. :)
Sonali
scourged, thorn(-)crowned, then
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Hello, Roy,
As always, in a touching song-poem, you've made scripture vivid and relevant to today.
I love .. flower's blight.
Christ is risen, friend - hallelujah!
Have a lovely week. :)
Sonali
scourged, thorn(-)crowned, then
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you Sonali, for this supportive, and generous review! Review, blessings, Roy.
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Thank you Sonali, for this supportive, and generous review! Review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
CONSIDER:
From lips, no word, or SAD complaint,
This man was God, WHO'S SON WAS BLESSED
Becoming flesh, was heaven's best! CAP...Heaven's
I wonder why, OUR Saviour's name,
Is cursed by man, HELD IN DISTAIN
To die for all, SAID, "Finished, done!"
SPARROW WHO died in midst of flight,
Majestic trees in forest fall,
WHILE dolphin cries its deathly call!
Regards:
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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CONSIDER:
From lips, no word, or SAD complaint,
This man was God, WHO'S SON WAS BLESSED
Becoming flesh, was heaven's best! CAP...Heaven's
I wonder why, OUR Saviour's name,
Is cursed by man, HELD IN DISTAIN
To die for all, SAID, "Finished, done!"
SPARROW WHO died in midst of flight,
Majestic trees in forest fall,
WHILE dolphin cries its deathly call!
Regards:
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you, Steve, you have done a good job. I will consider those suggestions most assuredly, there are awkward moments, I can usually pick others rhythmic faults, better than my own! And have a good holiday! And thanks for the great review! Blessings, Roy.
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Thank you, Steve, you have done a good job. I will consider those suggestions most assuredly, there are awkward moments, I can usually pick others rhythmic faults, better than my own! And have a good holiday! And thanks for the great review! Blessings, Roy.
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Dear Roy: Thanks. They say I have an 'ear' for flow. Happy Easter.
Cheers: Steve C
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You have certainly got that my friend. Some things I may have to retain for ' integrities ' sake, but thank you so much, Steve, you are invited to do that as much as you like. Bless you again, Roy.
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Dear Roy: I will NEVER give someone a 'fluffy 5'. Old school I guess.
With Respect: Steve C
Comment from emrpoems
Excellent aabb rhymes
Good alliteration with bound/betrayed, crowned/cursed, wonder/why, forest's/fall, dolphin/deathly.Special and moving message about the crucifixion of our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ who gave His life that we might save ours
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Excellent aabb rhymes
Good alliteration with bound/betrayed, crowned/cursed, wonder/why, forest's/fall, dolphin/deathly.Special and moving message about the crucifixion of our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ who gave His life that we might save ours
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful and comprehensive review, blessings, Roy.
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Thank you for your wonderful and comprehensive review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This was brilliantly conceived, Roy! Such majesty and pure, raw power to be drawn from your well chosen words here. He submitted to the ultimate sacrifice, so that all of mankind could be saved an eternal damnation. And yet, there are many who refuse to accept his gift, to discard Him as a fairy tale, no more important than Mother Goose. It must literally break His heart.
A beautifully penned piece, my friend!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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This was brilliantly conceived, Roy! Such majesty and pure, raw power to be drawn from your well chosen words here. He submitted to the ultimate sacrifice, so that all of mankind could be saved an eternal damnation. And yet, there are many who refuse to accept his gift, to discard Him as a fairy tale, no more important than Mother Goose. It must literally break His heart.
A beautifully penned piece, my friend!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dean, there are a few on site, thank you, for your most eloquent and affirming review, I always appreciate your looking in! Blessings, my friend, Roy.
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Thank you Dean, there are a few on site, thank you, for your most eloquent and affirming review, I always appreciate your looking in! Blessings, my friend, Roy.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with bush/hush...blight/flight...fall/call. Good alliteration with bound/betrayed...crowned/cursed...wonder/why...forest's/fall...dolphin/deathly. Good eye catching photo followed by a message that makes me happy to have chosen Jesus as my Lord and Savior.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with bush/hush...blight/flight...fall/call. Good alliteration with bound/betrayed...crowned/cursed...wonder/why...forest's/fall...dolphin/deathly. Good eye catching photo followed by a message that makes me happy to have chosen Jesus as my Lord and Savior.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review, and I'm glad you have strengthened by this, I write to encourage myself in The Lord. It's as much for me as it is for others. Thank you again, Brother, Roy.
Comment from NicciFaye
A wonderful and powerful poem of our Christ Jesus~!
Truly words to ONLY be recieved by those that follow him and understand what he truly died for and hung on the cross for.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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A wonderful and powerful poem of our Christ Jesus~!
Truly words to ONLY be recieved by those that follow him and understand what he truly died for and hung on the cross for.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you Niccifaye, for your kind, encouraging and generous, Review! I'll pray for you and your brother! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Roy,
Your poem is beautiful with great rhyming. I enjoyed the read very much. Thanks also for putting up scriptures that I always like to read. The artwork is perfect with your poem.
Kat
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Hi Roy,
Your poem is beautiful with great rhyming. I enjoyed the read very much. Thanks also for putting up scriptures that I always like to read. The artwork is perfect with your poem.
Kat
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you Kat for dropping by and for the excellent review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from amahra
What a beautiful Ode to our Father and His Son. I loved the poem for its meaning, but mostly because it was so well written. It rhymed very well, not forced. And the rhythm was fantastic.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful Ode to our Father and His Son. I loved the poem for its meaning, but mostly because it was so well written. It rhymed very well, not forced. And the rhythm was fantastic.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for the fantastic, expansive and generous review, I appreciate the affirmation so much, thank you also for the six, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Cedar
This is a very beautiful spiritual poem for Easter Sunday. Your words certainly speak the truth. Your poem is in perfect rhyme and the presentation picture really grabs the reader. Very well done. Bill
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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This is a very beautiful spiritual poem for Easter Sunday. Your words certainly speak the truth. Your poem is in perfect rhyme and the presentation picture really grabs the reader. Very well done. Bill
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review! Blessings, Roy.
