Each Blade of Grass
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6168 total reviews
Comment from Dom G Robles
Beautifully expressed, I like this poem. The flowers, as well, complementing the theme, are beautiful. A metaphor is used in this poem. And the last part, the writer, used personification. I love reading it. And I appreciate the tone and theme of the poem. Congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Beautifully expressed, I like this poem. The flowers, as well, complementing the theme, are beautiful. A metaphor is used in this poem. And the last part, the writer, used personification. I love reading it. And I appreciate the tone and theme of the poem. Congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Dom, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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As always, you are very welcome. Dom
Comment from dennis0530
With the splash of colors in your accompanying illustration, it is rather stingy to miss out glorifying the others. Your whites and blues take prominence in the foreground. The reds and violets take center stage. The golds and orange plead not to be left out.
Since this is writing about colors, these living plants of various hues are there to pleasure not only our eyes. Insects and birds come and partake of their share of the sweet nectar and in the process contribute to the cycle of reproduction and the perpetuation of beauty.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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With the splash of colors in your accompanying illustration, it is rather stingy to miss out glorifying the others. Your whites and blues take prominence in the foreground. The reds and violets take center stage. The golds and orange plead not to be left out.
Since this is writing about colors, these living plants of various hues are there to pleasure not only our eyes. Insects and birds come and partake of their share of the sweet nectar and in the process contribute to the cycle of reproduction and the perpetuation of beauty.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Dennis, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Awesome and such amazing colours too.
Children have so much fun whilst learning these days-a far cry from
My childhood.
Very descriptive and well written quatrains which demonstrate well the
Craycola colours learnt.
A delightful fun poem.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Awesome and such amazing colours too.
Children have so much fun whilst learning these days-a far cry from
My childhood.
Very descriptive and well written quatrains which demonstrate well the
Craycola colours learnt.
A delightful fun poem.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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seken, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
And your words are just as vibrant in the description of springs glory. I like how you have used perwinkle and magenta they give such a flair to poem. Good stuff there, Brooke.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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And your words are just as vibrant in the description of springs glory. I like how you have used perwinkle and magenta they give such a flair to poem. Good stuff there, Brooke.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
What a cutie this one is. Each blade of grass. I enjoyed the colors you incorporated into the poem. Ones not usually found in daily conversation. Periwinkle and magenta, Good words, great sounds. I would love to hear Sawyer saying them. LOL Well done Brooke, :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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What a cutie this one is. Each blade of grass. I enjoyed the colors you incorporated into the poem. Ones not usually found in daily conversation. Periwinkle and magenta, Good words, great sounds. I would love to hear Sawyer saying them. LOL Well done Brooke, :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) There is nothing cuter in this world than hearing him say periwinkle. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
i like the personification of flowers. this is a fine example of poetic art! i love the light-heartedness of all your poems!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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i like the personification of flowers. this is a fine example of poetic art! i love the light-heartedness of all your poems!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mfowler
I can tell you must have a little bit of 'spring happy' going on with flowers smiling at Easter time. Down here, it's autumn, but the roses are still creating a pre-winter show. Your three verses are great. They sparkle through the content, the word choices, but especially through your great rhythm. It's just a lovely moment of poetic celebration.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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I can tell you must have a little bit of 'spring happy' going on with flowers smiling at Easter time. Down here, it's autumn, but the roses are still creating a pre-winter show. Your three verses are great. They sparkle through the content, the word choices, but especially through your great rhythm. It's just a lovely moment of poetic celebration.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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mfowler, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
A very engaging poem in praise of this time of the year! I love the easy and joyful manner in which its written, Brooke, this is a nice languid style that you are very good at! You have a way of relaxing the reader! Written 8-6 syllable, which is always a good meter choice! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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A very engaging poem in praise of this time of the year! I love the easy and joyful manner in which its written, Brooke, this is a nice languid style that you are very good at! You have a way of relaxing the reader! Written 8-6 syllable, which is always a good meter choice! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
When it comes to the beauty of nature, it is such a great inspiration for poets and writers. This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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When it comes to the beauty of nature, it is such a great inspiration for poets and writers. This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
Hi Brooke, This is so sweet, don't remember all these colors when I was a kid...Sawyer is learning so fast...already in colors...so smart...just in the way he sees nature...love you poem...and you and your family have a wonderful Easter Day...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Hi Brooke, This is so sweet, don't remember all these colors when I was a kid...Sawyer is learning so fast...already in colors...so smart...just in the way he sees nature...love you poem...and you and your family have a wonderful Easter Day...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
