Three Bright Sparks
Cautionary Limericks57 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
I wrote this review once already, but I guess the site may have lost it when going off to 'maintain'.
I enjoyed these limericks very much - funny and clever! I did stumble a bit on those last lines, especially in the last stanza (is there an extra syllable in there, perhaps?)
In any event, they are still wonderful! Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
I wrote this review once already, but I guess the site may have lost it when going off to 'maintain'.
I enjoyed these limericks very much - funny and clever! I did stumble a bit on those last lines, especially in the last stanza (is there an extra syllable in there, perhaps?)
In any event, they are still wonderful! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Dawn.
I have been having the same trouble with the site tonight.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your here stanza portray the images well to allow the reader to see and feel each last day
good rhyme in each
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
good luck in the contest
your here stanza portray the images well to allow the reader to see and feel each last day
good rhyme in each
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you!
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welcome...SC
Comment from playinaround
Interesting limericks! I really like the word choices and the intelligence. Interesting and entertaining. Thank you for sharing these great limericks!!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
Interesting limericks! I really like the word choices and the intelligence. Interesting and entertaining. Thank you for sharing these great limericks!!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the nice review/
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for the clean limericks and constraining yourself to the contest's syllable count. I enjoyed each of your clever thumbnail, character sketches. Best wishes in the contest with three "sparks"- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
Thank you for the clean limericks and constraining yourself to the contest's syllable count. I enjoyed each of your clever thumbnail, character sketches. Best wishes in the contest with three "sparks"- Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you - let's see of they can 'spark' a contest win...
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I think they have an excellent shot! -Joan
Comment from GWinterwin
A funny little poem, with a good picture to make it complete. Good word flow and rhyming, telling of those who did things, that was their demise.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
A funny little poem, with a good picture to make it complete. Good word flow and rhyming, telling of those who did things, that was their demise.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi....
~ Very cleverly done with a great humorous edge to it... I can't pick a favorite stanze - they're all really good...
Good luck in the contest...!
Keep Smilin'...Jax
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
Hi....
~ Very cleverly done with a great humorous edge to it... I can't pick a favorite stanze - they're all really good...
Good luck in the contest...!
Keep Smilin'...Jax
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Jax.
Comment from thequeencatalyst
This was a fun little piece I found quite enjoyable. There's nothing I see that needs fixing, so I'm just here to say congratulations on writing such a cute limerick! :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
This was a fun little piece I found quite enjoyable. There's nothing I see that needs fixing, so I'm just here to say congratulations on writing such a cute limerick! :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Petriesan
never have been able to create a limerick, have I.
I love the last one. fission. . .interanl combustion of his mind?
very funny
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
never have been able to create a limerick, have I.
I love the last one. fission. . .interanl combustion of his mind?
very funny
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Janelle
Ha, ha, loved it! Would have been very difficult to write a limerick without being bawdy I reckon, but you've done a great job. Made me laugh and that is the point of any limerick, isn't it! Great entry for the comp and I wish you all the best. Regards, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
Ha, ha, loved it! Would have been very difficult to write a limerick without being bawdy I reckon, but you've done a great job. Made me laugh and that is the point of any limerick, isn't it! Great entry for the comp and I wish you all the best. Regards, Jan
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Jan!
Comment from mfowler
I was impressed by the cleverness of your language in each of your three stanzas. Your focus is on unfortunate deaths of people taking extraordinary risks. I had to laugh at the black humour of the photographer's last photo. Your choice of "to quick em" as a rhyme and words in vs 2 made me smile, and the simple notion of sniffing uranium in the cranium was LOL. Good luck with your limerick collection.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
I was impressed by the cleverness of your language in each of your three stanzas. Your focus is on unfortunate deaths of people taking extraordinary risks. I had to laugh at the black humour of the photographer's last photo. Your choice of "to quick em" as a rhyme and words in vs 2 made me smile, and the simple notion of sniffing uranium in the cranium was LOL. Good luck with your limerick collection.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review.