Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

Consider:
She swam with AN Orca
Mad Mike, mechanic from Twickenham love the 'm's
And Boom! he achieved 'tomic fission 9 beats'flows better

Loved the threesome. Verrry funnny! Above are suggestions only. No disrespect intended.

Regards:

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks, Stephen.

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

Loved your limerick(s)! I especially liked the one about the physicist-mathematician. All very cleverly done and totally within the syllable requirements :) I am looking forward to trying a limerick soon. Thanks for sharing. acerisestory

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks for the kind words.

Steve

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

I'm no expert on limericks but I find these limericks full of dark humor quite successful.

Great rhymes and wonderful rhythm.

I like the alliteration in Mad Mike, mechanic.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. These are great!

Lena

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks, Lena.

Steve

reply by Lena Borghi on 22-Apr-2014

You're welcome :)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Very innovative humor limerick.
Snorted uranium
Into his cranium
And Boom! he achieved nuclear fission

couldn't get funnier than this.
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thank you - apparently the voters think you can!

Steve

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a great series of limericks and not bawdy just humorous for the writing prompt. Good luck in the contest.
~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks, Teresa.

Steve

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

love it well written and funny and as you say not bawdy quite a change from many limericks and their origins
a really enjoyable read
well done in the parameters of a limerick!

dip

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks, Dip.

Steve

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Poet,

I think you did a great job in writing your limerick poem with three verses. It was fun to read and interesting too. Great job!

MizKat

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thank you.

Steve

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

I used to write limericks to my girlfriend in high school. One actually made her laugh so loud, she got detention. I wonder where that girl is now? I think limericks are an art form and their fun. Good luck.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thank you.

Perhaps you could write a limerick about her...

Steve

reply by victor 66 on 22-Apr-2014

You are welcome.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Limerick, never heard of this style until this site. Your poem is really funny. And it reminded me of the saying, that people who are expert at what they love is eventually consumed or destroyed by it.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Does that mean I will be consumed by a Limerick?! :o)

Steve

Comment from honeytree

Exceptional

I loved the art work and the words written here.

The words were very imaginative

I really loved the last few words

"And Boom! he achieved nuclear fission"


honey tree

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

Thanks for th kind words and the six stars.

Steve

reply by honeytree on 22-Apr-2014

I loved what you wrote Annie

reply by honeytree on 24-Apr-2014

I enjoyed what you wrote.

honeytree

reply by honeytree on 24-Apr-2014

I loved what you wrote.

honeytree