Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is very descriptive. The rainbow colors are in the bubbles, the idea is unique and original. Good contest entry.
Happy Easter to you.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Happy Easter to you as well, RYME4. Thank you for your wonderful review and for taking the time to read and comment on my haiku. Thank you for your comment about it being original, and I appreciate your good luck wish for the contest.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Very nice, bubbles do create a lovely, prism-like effect when floating,especially in sunlight. Children are always fascinated by them, and even my dogs like to jump up and burst the colorful bubbles.

You did a wonderful job with this haiku. I wish you the best of luck i the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, Dean, for this wonderful review for my haiku. You're always so kind with your comments Nd I appreciate it very much. I like to try and catch those bubble rainbows, too, and I'm an old biddy. Lol

reply by Dean Kuch on 19-Apr-2014

Hah ha, you are very welcome, and so do I!

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent entry, mystery writer.

Top imagery too, as the fascinated child tries to grab the soapy bubbles.

Best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thanks for your kind review and for taking the time to share your thoughts about my haiku, Ted. I always appreciate your time.

Comment from 4tun81

Exceptional

Excellent haiku. This has multiple images, has a grammatically connected pair of lines, and most importantly, it engages the reader's imagination.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Oh my, I can't tell you how honored I am to receive such a wonderful rating and review for my haiku, Joe. I'm delighted you thought the words engaged imagination. Thank you so much.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

It's easy to visualize bubbles on a sunny day reflecting all the colors of a rainbow. A lovely picture of a child grabbing for them.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my haiku, RodG. I appreciate your kind comments so glad you enjoyed the imagery of the words. Thank you so much!

Comment from yarnteller

Excellent

Blown bubbles do catch rainbows as my grandchildren will attest to. Nice haiku poem that reminds us that summer is just around the corner. Enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my haiku, yarnteller. I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed. Shhhhhhhhh don't tell anyone, but this old biddy loves to catch bubble rainbows, too. lol

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Poet,

You sure did a great job in writing a haiku poem for the prompt. I'm sure glad you wrote what kigo means as I was wondering how the child grabbed rainbows.

MizKat

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, Kat, for your kind review for my haiku. I appreciate your time to read and share your thoughts. I love seeing kids go after the rain owed bubbles as they float. Thanks.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I am not an expert of Haiku's, yet I must say, this is a very good presentation, incredible imagery and the vision it provides is beautiful indeed.
Well done,
I would think, one of the better ones in the competition.
Bravo

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you for selecting my haiku to read, RGstar, and I appreciate your taking the time to review and share your comments. Thanks so much.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Ah, great take of the rainbow prompt. I'd never
have thought of the bubble rainbows.
Your haiku is visual, and depicts a famiar scene.

Best of luck at polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you, hw, for your great review and I appreciate your comment about the different take on the prompt as that's what I hoped to go for. I'm glad you enjoyed the visual aspect and thank you for your good luck wish for the contest. : )

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"bubbles float
on sunny afternoon
child grabs rainbows"
this is a fine haiku. blowing soap bubbles as they reflect from the sun into rainbow colours. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thank you, Rebekka, for taking the time to read and review my haiku. I appreciate your kind comments and good luck wish for the contest. Thanks!