Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

God gave his only son. His son forgave those who killed him. We have learned a lot, but we need to keep learning. We allow too much violence still. Great work.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

It would seem that the people in these modern times do not follow the teachings of Christ the just say they do. the world would be a peaceful place if we all sought out the spirit instead of material things.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A lovely expression of spirituality on this of all special days, Good Friday. Clearly written. Presentation is dynamic. Particularly like the last stanza.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks, Happy Easter!!!

Comment from 1954speed

Excellent

Very good poem! I like the rhythm and of course, the message. The first stanza grabbed you and held you through the entire poem, which did not dissappoint. Thanks for this!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks, Happy Easter!

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Declaration of the Lord, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed poem. Good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014

Thanks, Happy Easter!

reply by lakeport on 18-Apr-2014

thank you very much, Happy Easter,lakeport.