Enchanting Forest-(5-7-5)
forest and animals3 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the dry river bed as the cross path to the dry forest floor
you have vivid images to portray this
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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good luck in the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel the dry river bed as the cross path to the dry forest floor
you have vivid images to portray this
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you
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welcome...SC
Comment from rjuselius
"Forest brims with life
cross path of disenchantment
sun dried river bed."
i just love these fantasy poems with enchanted forests, pixies and little fairies! if i had six stars to give..
thank you for sharing! good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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"Forest brims with life
cross path of disenchantment
sun dried river bed."
i just love these fantasy poems with enchanted forests, pixies and little fairies! if i had six stars to give..
thank you for sharing! good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Comment from donette1914
very cute little poem of a forest and sun dried river bed and all the animals a very fun write and a well penned job well done it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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very cute little poem of a forest and sun dried river bed and all the animals a very fun write and a well penned job well done it was a pleasure
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you
